导读： www up360 com英语阅读大赛(共6篇)七年级英语阅读大赛试题济南第十五中学七年级英语阅读大赛试题 班级：姓名： 完形填空 阅读下面短文，从每题A、B、C三个选项中，选出一个能填入文章中相应空白处的最佳答案。（10分）YDay, many people eat special foods for good luck In Spain...
YDay, many people eat special foods for good luck. In Spain and some Latin American twelve grapes at midnight on New Year’s Eve. One grape is find the coin for luck and money in the new year. Of course they don’t eat the noodles on New Year’s Eve and their birthdays. 1. A. On B.In C. For
2. A. are eating B. eats C. eat
3. A. with B. for C. to
4. A. every B. any C. each
5. A. dumplings B. hot dog C. hamburgers6. A. Nobody B. Everybody C. Somebody
7. A food B. dumplings C. coin
8. A. people B. man C. children
9. A What B. This C. It
10. A. short B. long C. large
My family like different kinds of food. My grandpa ____11___dumplings.“They taste really good.”He says. But my grandma doesn’t like ____12____. Her favorite food is steamed(蒸的) rice____13____ beef. My mother likes sweet food very much, so Guangzhou food is her favorite. She often says she would like to ____14____ in Guangzhou..and then she can eat sweet food every day. My father _____15___ likes hot(辣的) food very much. So we often eat hot pot(火锅) at home. Of course we have some _____16___ like orange juice after the meal. Mutton _____17___ is my older brother’s favorite. He often has it for a meal. He says soup is good for him. But my mother and I don’t like it. We think it’s ___18____. For me, noodles are nice, I like tomato noodles, I like ____19____ noodles, too. My parents say they’re ____20____ for my health.
11. A: likes B: buys C: makes D: cooks
12. A: them B: they C: him D: her
13. A: of B: for C: about D: with
14. A: move B: come C: walk D: live
15. A: even B: also C: only D: too
16. A: drinks B: fruit C: food D: vegetables
17. A: soup B: special C: bread D: rice
18. A: good B: exciting C: cool D: terrible
19. A: beef B: cabbages C: carrots D: chickens
20. A: different B: good C: bad D: dangerous
Nancy and Sheila are in the same class. They are friends. Nancy wants to invite Sheila to dinner on Sunday. But Sheila doesn't know the way. Now Nancy is telling her.
It's easy. You can take No. 4 bus. After you get off at Red Road, cross it and take the first turning on the left. Walk along the road for about five minutes, and then you will see a big tree. Go straight on and walk about 100 metres, you'll see a big red house. This is not my home. Go past the big house about four hundred metres, and you will see a small yellow house beside a small tree. Then you can open the door with your foot.
"With my foot?" asks Sheila. "Why?"
"Well, you won't come to my house empty-handed(空手地), will you?" answers Nancy.
21. Nancy asks Sheila to
A. have dinner with her C. go to the cinema together B. go to a big red house D. go shopping together 22. Which of the following is TRUE according to the passage? A. Nancy and Sheila are classmates. B. Sheila should take NO. 5 bus first. C. Nancy asks Sheila to come to her home on Saturday. D. Sheila knows Nancy's home very well. A. It's five minutes walk. B. It's a hundred minutes' ride. C. It's about two hundred metres. D. It's about five hundred metres. A. It's beside a big red house. B. It's beside a small tree. C. It's on the right side of Red Road. D. It's behind a small yellow house. A. Because she thinks Sheila should carry a lot of presents in both hands. B. Because she thinks Sheila should bring her family members to her home. C. Because she thinks Sheila should bring other classmates to her home. D. Because she thinks Sheila will be afraid to open the door with her hands. 23. How far is it from the big tree to the small yellow house? 24. Where is Nancy's house ? 25. Why does Nancy asks Sheila to open the door with her foot?
Now many boys and girls wear the same clothes as girls , and some of them have long hair.So sometimes it is difficult to tell whether(是否)they are boys or girls.
On Sunday morning, an old man goes for a walk in a park. After a while he is tired（累的）and
he sits down on a chair. A young person is standing on the other side (边) of the lake.
“Excuse me,” the old man says to the person next to him on the chair, “Do you see that person with the red trousers and long hair? Is it a boy or a girl?”
“A boy,” says the person, “He is my son, Jack”
“Oh,” the old man says, “Are you his father?”
“I’m not,” the other person says, “I’m his mother.”
( )26. The passage tells us it is not easy to tell whether many children are boys or girls.
( )27. One day an old man goes for a walk in the street.
( )28. The young person standing on the other side of the lake is a girl.
( )29. The person next to the old man is Jack’s mother.
( )30. The old man thinks the person next to him is a woman.
In the morning, Mr Martin comes into his garden. He sees too much snow in the garden. Mr
Martin wants to take his car out, so he asks a cleaner to clean the road(路) from his garage(车库) to the gate. He says to the cleaner, “Don’t put any snow on the flowers or on the wall. And don’t put any into the street, or the policeman will come.” Then he goes out.
When he comes back, the road is clean. There is no snow on the flowers, on the wall or in the street. But when he opens the garage to get his car out, he sees: it is full of snow, the snow from the road, and his car is under the snow.
31.What is the weather like?___________
A、It’s very hot. B、It’s raining. C、It’s cold D、It’s windy.
32.Who cleans the snow on the road? ___________
A、Mr Martin. B、A policeman. C、Mrs Martin. D、A cleaner.
33.Why can’t the cleaner put any snow into the street? ___________
A、Because there’s too much snow, too. B、Because the policeman will come.
C、Because there are flowers in the street. D、Because there’s a car in the street.
34.Where is the snow after the cleaner cleans the road? ___________
A、On the flowers. B、In the garage.C、In the street. D、We don’t know.
35.What does Mr Martin think of the cleaner? ___________
A、He is smart. B、He does a right thing.
C、He does a wrong thing. D、He helps Mr Martin.
Lots of kids dislike homework. They think that if you are working at school all day, you shouldn’t have to do it at home too. You should be able to relax and have fun, play sports, hang out with friends and do all the relaxing things you need to do after a hard day at school.
But homework does have its ”: You can practice what you have learned. You can learn things you need to know by heart. You can learn how to work by yourself.
How to do homework? Write down your homework and make a note of when you have to hand it in. If you don’
you do after school. Do your work on your own. It’s OK to ask mom or dad for help
36. The first paragraph tells us why some kids ________ __________.
37.The underlined word “up-side” means ______ in Chinese.
A 方法 B 益处 C 策略 D 原则
39. We should do our homework in a _____ place.
40. What should a student write in his homework timetable?
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1. There is ___ office building. ___ office building is near the hotel.
A. a, A B. an, A C. an, The D. the, The
2. This is Jim Green, ___.
A. Mrs B. Mr Green C.Miss Green D. Mrs Green
3. -What class are you in?
-I’m in ___.
A. Class Seven, Grade Eight B. Grade Eight, Class Seven
C. class seven, grade eight
- Very cold.
A. What , / B. How, / C. How, like D. Wha t’s, like
5. -Have you got any pens?
-Yes, I ___.
A. have got B .have
A. in B. at C. to D. from
7. There is a short ___ every forty minutes.
A. class B. rest C. break D. talk
8. -Can he finish ___ his homework at half past eight in the morning ?
-No, he ___ .
A. does, can’t B. do, can C doing, can’t D does, can
9. -Shall we go and see the giraffes?
A. No, we aren’t
C. Yes, let’s go B. Yes, we are D. Yes, we do C. have got one D. have one 6. I play football ___ ten to ten. D. grade eigh t, class seven 4. - ___ is the weather ___ in Beijing tomorrow?
10. What about ___?
A. playing B. play C. to play D. to playing
11. Everyone in my class ___ here now.
A. am B. is C. are
A .have D. bexkb1.com 12. There ___ lots of meat and vegetables on the table B. has C. are D. is
13.They ___ in this office and they like their ___.
A. work, jobs B. work, worker C job, works D works, jobs
14. ___ is important ___ healthy.
A. It, stay B. It, to stay C. That, to stay D. That, stay
15. My brother helps me ___ my English.
A. with B. for C. of D. in
Ⅱ 完型填空 （每小题1分，共10分）
It is Sunday today. Steve and his parents go to his uncle’s home for __1_. Steve’s uncle Bruce has a little white dog. Its _2__ is Paul. It’s only one year old.
After lunch, Uncle Bruce says, “ I will go to Sydney, _3__ I can’t take Paul there. You know, I don’t want _4__ a little dog in a big city.”
“Can I have Paul, Uncle Bruce?” says Steve. “ We don’t have _5__ dogs.”
Uncle Bruce _6_ Steve’s mother and father.
“Please, Mum. Let _7_ have it.” says Steve.
“You can ask your _8__.” says Steve’s mother.
“Yes, you can have it.”
“Thanks, Dad. Thanks, Uncle Bruce. _9__ here, Paul. Let’s play the ball”
“look, the dog is his now.” Uncle Bruce laughs.
Steve is _10__ to be with paul. It’s Steve’s favourite now.
1. A. breakfast B. lunch C. supper
D. happy D. dinner 2. A. name B. book 3. A. and B. or 4. A. have B. has 5. A. any 7. A. me B. some B. him C. color C.so C. to have C. much C. her C. father C. Go C. heavy D. seat 6. A. looks like B. looks for C. looks after D. looks at 8. A. uncle B. aunt 9. A. Take B. Come 10. A. tall B. cute
Ⅲ 阅读理解 （每小题1分，共20分）
A In many English-speaking countries people have four meals a day: breakfast, lunch, tea break and dinner.
People have breakfast at any time from seven to nine in the morning. They have porridge, eggs or bread. English people drink tea or coffee at breakfast.
Lunch comes at one o’clock. Afternoon tea is from four to five in the afternoon and dinner is about at half past seven. For dinner, they have soup, then they have meat or fish with vegetables. After that, they eat some other things, like bananas, apples or oranges. But not all English people eat like that. Some of them have their dinner in the middle of the day. Their meals are breakfast, dinner, tea break and supper, all these meals are very si mple (简单).
1. Many English-speaking countries have ___ meals a day.
A. two B. three
A. tea and eggs C. four D. three or four B. tea and coffee 2. Poeple have ___ for their breakfast.
C. bread and eggs D.porridge, eggs, bread, tea or coffee
3. People have ___ for their dinner.
A.porridge and eggs B. tea
C. eggsand bread D. soup, meat, fish with vegetables and fruit
4. People have ___ at one o’clock.
A. breakfast B. lunch C. tea break D. dinner
5. In some English-speaking countries dinner can come ___.
A. in the morning B. in the middle of the day
C.at one o’clock
B D.at seven o’clock
In my family, I have too many rules(规则), they’re strict but kind of interesting. I have to wash my hands before meals. I can’t meet my net friends. I have to go to bed by ten. On weekdsys, I have to get up early in the morning. I can’t watch TV or go out on school nights. I have to go home quickly after school, because I have too much homework to do. On weekends, if my mother goes shopping, I have to look after my little sister. I have to help my mom do some cleaning. I must do some dishes after we finish eating. In the evening, I can’t go out with my friends, I have to go for a walk with Wangwang, my cute dog. Later I have to do my homework after dinner.
1.The rules of my home are ___.
A. strict and boring B. strict and interesting C. free and boring D. free and interesting
2.I can’t watch TV ___.
A.on Saturdays B.on school nights C. on weekends D. on Sundays
3.I have to go home quickly to ___ after school.
A.do my home work B. have dinner C.watch TV D.help my parents
4.I have to go to bed ___.
A. after ten B. before nine C. at nine D. by ten
5. I ___ go out with my friends in the evening of weekends.
A. can B. can’t C. have to D. don’t
Ⅳ 补全对话 从方框中选择恰当的句子补全对话，有两项是多余的。（每小题2 分，共10分） A: Hi! Susan! ___1__
B :No, it isn’t.
A : __2___
A: What are your lessons today?
B: I have maths at half past eight. At ten o’clock, I have a Chinese lesson.A: __3__
B: It’s at two oclock in the afternoon.
B: History. I think it’s interesting.
B: No, I don’t.
A: Me too.
A. What’s your favourite lesson?
B. Is it Thursday today?
C. What’s your favourite sport?
D. Do you like maths?
E. What’s the date today?
F. When is your English lesson?
G. What day is it today?
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Ⅴ 用括号里所给词的正确形式填空 （每小题1分，共10分）
1. What are your __________ jobs? (parents)
2. Do you know the girl __________ Lingling? (call)
3. You can see __________ in the zoo. (monkey)
4. There __________ a table and two desks. (be)
5 .Would you like __________ some water to the boy? (give)
6. Yuanxiao can bring ________ good luck (运气) all the year round. (we)
7. The tiger doesn’t like _________ grass. (eat)
8. Maths _________ Jim’s favourite subject. (be)
9. We should eat more vegetable to stay _________. (health)
10. The girl __________ her homework at home. (not do) Ⅵ 按要求完成下列句子(每小题1分，共10分)
1.Sam’s favourite drink is orange juice.(对画线部分提问)
_______ Sam’s _________ _________?
2.It’s very hot in Beijing in summer. （对画线部分提问）
________ the ________ ________ in beijing in summer.
3.I have got some beef in the fridge.（改为一般疑问句）
________ you ________ _____ ___ beef in the fridge?
4.I like English and Chinese. （改为同义句）
I like English ________ ________ ________ Chinese.
5.He does well in English. (改为否定句)
He ________ ________ _________ _________English.
6.She can see twelve birds in the tree.（对画线部分提问）
________ ________ ________ ________ she see in the bird?
2、（ ）是实施新课程改革的主力军，是新课程实施的研究者和具体（ ）。
3、课程目标的级别不完全等同于基础教育阶段的各个年级。从3年级开设英语课程的学校，3、4年级应完成（ ），5、6年级完成（ ）。
4、语言技能一级目标中读写要求：能看图识字；能在指认物体的前提下认读所学词语；能在图片的帮助下读懂简单的小故事; 能正确（ ）。
立自信心，养成良好的学习习惯,和形成有效的学习策略，发展自主学习的能力和合作精神；使学生掌握一定的英语基础知识和（ ）、（ ）、（ ）、写技能，形成一定的综合语言运用能力。
2、基础教育阶段英语课程的总体目标是培养学生的（ ） 能力。
3、英语语言知识主要含：（ ）、词汇、 语法、以及功能和话题。
（ ）1．A．any B．land C．than D．hand
（ ）2．A．over B．chose C．come D．Broke
（ ）3．A．pear B．ear C．near D．dear
（ ）4．A．days B．ways C．says D．pays
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（ ）6．A．nine B．while C．time D．live
（ ）7．A．reach B．rich C．school D．touch
（ ）8．A．worked B．watched C．pushed D．filled
（ ）9. A．league B．agree C．banana D．again
（ ）10. A．happen B．mutton C．potato D．vegetable
1．c ______ neither warm nor cold.
2．f ________to come or go after.
3．S ____the last day of the week.
4．c_ ________to pick out from a great number of things.
5．d_ _______not of the same kind
6．c ________to do or make something the same.
7．h _______a time of rest from work .
8．i ________in place of that.
9．m ________ piece of information passed from one person to another.
10．f ________ something that is loved above all others.
1．A group ______ boys and girls are dancing in the park．
A．with B．of C．for D．to
2． 2．How about ______ to the cinema on Sunday?
A．go B．to go C．going D．will go
3．It’s ______ a beautiful stamp．
A．quite B．too C．very D．so
4．Jim asked Lin Feng ______ forget to change water．
A．to not B．don’t C．not D．not to
5．I ______ him to go there with me．
A．wish B．hope C．think D．Let
6．You don’t like the picture． I don’t like it, ______．
A．too B．also C．either D．still
7．He doesn’t know ______ English because he has studied it for only ______ weeks．
A．much…a few B．little…few C．few…a little D．a few…a little
8．It’s about ______ walk from my house．
A．ten minute B．ten minutes’ C．ten minute’s D．ten minutes
9．Do you have ______ to tell us?
A．something new B．new something C．anything new D．new anything
10．______ of the students are girls in our class．
A．Two three B．Two threes C．Two thirds D．Second three
1．She did very well in her English exam．（改为一般疑问句）
______ she ______ very well in her English exam?
2．He has some bread for breakfast every morning．（改为否定句）
He ______ ______ ______ bread for breakfast every morning．
3．I have been to Beijing twice．（就画线部分提问）
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4．Linda’s just come back from America．（改为反意疑问句）
Linda’s just come back from America, ______ ______?
5．When I get there, I’ll go to see him at once．（改为同义句）
I’ll go to see him ______ ______ ______ I get there．
6．The（绿色圃中小学教育网 原文地址/thread-493323-1-1.html） box was so heavy that she couldn’t carry it．（改为简单句）
The box was ______ heavy ______ her ______ carry．
7．Is the earth round? The little boy asked．（改为宾语从句）
The little boy asked ______ the earth ______ round．
8．He likes the book． So does she．（改为简单句，使句意不变）
______ he ______ she ______ the book．
9．Let’s hurry, or we’ll be last．（改为复合句）
______ we ______ hurry, we’ll ______ late．
10 .Didn’t they tell you about it?（改为被动语态）
________ you ________ about it?
If you don’t use your arms or your legs for some time, they will become weak; when you start using them again, they will gradually（逐渐地）become stronger again. Everybody knows this. Yet many people do not seem to know that it is the s 1with memory. When someone says that he has a good memory , he really means that he d 2 give it enough chance to become stronger.
If a friend says that his arms and legs are weak, we k 3that it is his own fault. But if he tells us that he has a poor memory, many of us think that his p 4 are to blame , and f 5 of us know that it is just his own fault. Have you e 6 found some people can’t read or write but they usually have b 7 memories?This is b 8 they cannot read or write and they h 9
to remember things; they cannot write them down in a little notebook. They must remember dates, names, songs and stories; so their memory is the whole time being exercised. So if you want a good memory, l 10
from these people: practise remembering.
1．________ 2．________ 3．________ 4．________ 5．________ 6．________ 7．________
8．________ 9．________ 10．________
People all over the world eat rice. Millions of people in Asia, Africa and South America eat it every day of their lives. Some people eat almost nothing but rice. Rice is a kind of grass. There are more than 7,000 kinds of rice. Farmers grow rice in many countries, even in the southern part of the United States and in eastern Australia. No one really knows where rice came from. Some scientist think that it started to grow in two places. They think that one kind of rice grew in southern Asia thousands of years ago. Someone in China wrote about it almost 5,000 years ago.
Read the following paragraph and write a composition as stated at about 300 words in 60 minutes. Your composition will be graded according to clarity, accuracy and meaningfulness. In accordance with CRI news, the spirit of Chinese volunteers, from responding to the May 12 earthquake to the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, not only touched the Chinese people, but also generated worldwide attention. Official statistics show that china has accumulated about 8 billion hours of volunteer work from 380 million volunteers since 1993 and is going to have more and more volunteers, especially the youth.
How do you understand volunteer work? In what way(s) is it important to promote the well-being of individuals, families, communities and the world at large? Your writing ought to contain three parts, your viewpoint, the supporting ideas, and the conclusion. Come and join us in volunteer work right now!
Dear grandfather: How are you?
I am writing to invite you to join us, in the next year, to be a voluntear in the great event, which is to hold in Shanghai. We, a generation born in the 90s in our city, have made a team to do the volunteer work. And you are welcomed by all our team members awing to your great amount of knowledge about Chinese traditions and culture. Please don't tell me you are too old to do this job. I believe you are sure to accept my invitation after reading my following explannation of the importance of the volunteer work.
Nowadays, volunteer work, which has raised public interest and concern, is becomming more and more popular throughout the world. As is known to all, volunteer work is not only meaningful but also necessary. One my personal wete, what's more, it's interesting and pleasant! It help us develop oursel .
Firstly, for individuals, especially those young, to do volunteer work is an awailuabe wany to goin social experience. By doing volunteer work, they can meet vorrious people and they may run across all kinds of troubles. They however, can become mature and determined by solving these problems. You know, no pains, no gains. Also, individuals will realize that they do make a difference in someone else's life, even the whole event, the world! Their confidence can be rovised and confidence is what it takes to do any job well.
For families, if you're the side that received the help of the volunteers, of couse your issue will be more easily dealt with. If you're the side who give others your hand, you will realize there exists no better way to educate your children that “a virtwre deserues amother” because you'll get the best present - smile deeply from one's heart, in the whole world.
It is a great chance for all members getting closer to each other in communities by taking
part in volunteer work. Their team spirits, their co-operation will be great improued. So, why not? The most importantly, for the whole world, for the entire human race, volunteer work will make earth a better place to live in, it is through volunteer work that we know there are so many people are willing to help others although they can't get money from it. It is through volunteer work that we know we are all brothers and sisters, that we are all families.
My dear grandfather, canre on! Join us and help introduce owr great Chinese culture to the world. 21 centuring is on open cewtury. You can trust yourself and please trust us, too! We'll help you and we need you help! Let's make the world a better place by being a volunteer! It's a small step for us but it is a leurge one for the whole world! Love you.
Your granddaught. 专家建议：
To be a volunteer ，Bring a ray of sunshine
It is a great pleasure for me to have the wondeful chance to put pen to paper and send my greetings to you. You said that you wanted to be a volunteer and didn't know whether you should or not. I want to help you analyse it.
In my opinion. I think it is not noly a good chance to help others but also a good opportunity to make selp-improvement. You'd better participate in the volunteer work. If we compane youth to flouers, as is often the case, then the young volunteers are the most beautiful flowers. By joining in the vounteer work, you will leam how to help others and how to love others. What's more you can also find it out that there are many people suffering from disaster and then you will value your comfortable life. Although you may feel very tired as a volunteer and it may cost you much time to help others, I still insist that you should be a volunteer because the advantages bright about by volunteer work overweigh the disadvantages.
It all the people refused to be volunteers, the people suffered from the may 12 earthquake could lose heart and most of them wouldn't have the chance to survive from that disaster. If none of the people wanted to be a volunteer, the Beijing olympic Games would be a failure. If every people didn't feel like being a volunteer, there would be no people cleaning the environment and protecting the beautiful scenery automatically. It was terrible! From all mentioned above,
volunteers play a very important part in our daily life. To be a volunteer will gain glory for China. As is brow to all, Chinese children are always laughed at for lack of practice. So to be a volunteer is a good chance to canpensate for it.
From my point of view, it's high time that you became a volunteer and learned to help others. If everyone makes a contribution to helping others, the world will be much more beautiful! At last, wish you all the best! Yours sincerely. Lily.
文章二三段的结构很混乱，建议这样的文章段落都应写成总、分、总的形式更能突出文章的逻辑性，并在“分”的部分也一条一条分开写，而不是都堆在一段内，让人分不清哪句是观点哪句是论证，很混乱。另外注意同义词的替换已是文章表达更丰富，比如文章中多次出现的帮助他人就都是使用：help others就显得过于单一了~ The importance of volunteer work 崔静远
In my opinion, volunteer work is quite an important part of the modern society. The reasons are as follows.
In the modern time, thanks to the deselopment of economy and technolodge, material enjoyment 13 earned both in higher quality and larger quantiy. At a price of this, individunls are taking the ris
k of losing their own values and even sparing no effert to make their fartane even at the price of the interest of the society. So the volunteer work has been playing an important part as a spiritual comfort not only to the receivers but also to the volunteers, promoting the well-being of the love-givers, making ertra value for others and keeping a perfect balance of the whole society.
In families, volunteer work will help to emphasize the importance of morality, meet emotional needs and even become a vivid educational lesson. Parents, who are widely regarded as the first and most important teachers of their children, are teaching their children through the activities which must truely toach the deepest part of the young souls, instead of serious, traditional crivical words. Also, during the process, in which every member showstus true love, other members are able to recognize him from a difference point of view. This kind of awarness is promised to promote the communication of the family in the future. In the whole world, the volunteer work can be considered to be an appropriate part of the globalization, during which the
world is becoming a Global village. And the natural and economic chisasters are driving people from different cultaral back grounds to stand together on the same side, emphasizing the interest of the whole world, which must not be deffended without any country's participation. And it is the volunteer work that can be granted the role of offering help in its hour of marimum need. All in all, volunteer work is truely an inreplacable part of the society and it is our responsibility to give our hands to make the world a better place. 专家建议：
文章结构清晰明了，简洁明了的开头和结尾紧扣主题，精干又有力，很方便读者对文章主旨的把握。中间部分的逻辑性强，思路也很清晰。唯一不足的是在一些长难句的表达上出现了一些错误，有些句子让人很难理解。在以后的写作中可以多关注长句子的练习。 Volunteer Life 代昱丞
As we know, “volunteer” is a kind of “work” that you offer to do it, and also, it is for free. From schools to shops, from Olympics to world wars, volunteers are everywhere. And to Chinese people, last year is an impresive
（impressive） year because of volunteers. In May 12 earthquake and the 2008 Beijing Olympic Gams, volunteers played a really important role. They touched every Chinese's heart, including me.
I don't usually have chances to do volunteer's work, but I have some creative ideas about it. In my opinion, helping others is a kind of volunteer and it is important to our lives. We can't become a volunteer in poor rural area, but we can help classmates sowe
（solve） a math problem; we can't join the Olympics, but we can take part in a sports meeting in school and develope the spirit of “higher, faster, stronger” in other ways; we can't go to Wenchuan, but we can send our “gifts” there. In fact, we are volunteering everyday and everywhere, but we ignore it sometimes. Volunteer is not a simple matter about yourself, it also has great influence to your life, your family, even the world. If there are not volunteers any more, everyone is selfish and vain, the world will be a lonely place. Volunteer can bring people warm and kind feelings and help improve your personality. When you are volunteering, you'll find the beauty of the world and
life and you really feel and touch some hard experience, it is able to lead you to treat your family, your life, your fridends(friends) more previously. My dad once told me a story: at the time of Beijing Olympic Games one year's flashback, some volunteers said that time was really a hard but valuable memory. Sometimes, they had to stand, it was not permitted to argue with tourists; sometimes, they even wanted to cry, but smiles had to be on theirs faces all the time. Volunteer was not an easy job, but they said that they didn't regret at all —— they responded to China, they won reputation for our nation!
So, volunteer is worth joining and valuing, though it is hard, you have gained the best award —— a kind heart.
Start your volunteer life now! 专家建议：
文章思路清晰，叙述条理清楚，但句子之间的衔接做得不够，要多用连接词。此外，应多掌握一些词语的同义词，这样避免重复。在句式变换方便也要多下些功夫。 Volunteer work: an unique lesson 刁文卿
辽宁省大连市大连市第十二中学高二9班 With the rapid development of techndogy（technology） and communication in our society, the sense of competitiveness and cooperation filled our mind steadily. At the same time, the owarness(awareness) of helping others in people's mind also became stronger and stronger. This situation led to the start of a new “job”—volunteer. We just found from the passage that the increasing number of the vdunteer(volunteer) touched all the people home and abroad. And I argue the point that volunteer work plays an integral part in our daily life especially for the youth in China.
First and foremest(foremost), nowadays, parents can only have one child and he or she may be given the best care of the other members in the family. As a consequence, the only clild(child) may become selfish and self-centered unconciously(unconsciously).
The volunteer work, as a special lessons can help the youngster put the other people's feeling before theirs and ask for their opinion before taking actions. Second volunreer(volunteer) work is not only a training of do others a favour but a process of improving your cooperation ability as well. Last but not least, volunteer work is an unique lesson that we cant
（cannot） get in our school. Former leader Jiangzemin said: the main goal in education is making students more creative and helping them reach their full potential. And in my poirt(point) view, it is volunteer work which can help them reach their full potential but not our school lessons. This kind of pratical practise can make us know more about what is going on in our society and in the world, for instance, the May 12 earthquake in wenchuan and the wonderful 2008 Beijing Olympic Game and so on.
All the evidence discussed in the above awalysis the points to my conclusion that volunteer work is an unique lesson for our teenagers as it make us know more. do more and think more. And I believe that the accumulation of volunteer will rising rapily and it will lead our country to a brighter future. 专家建议：
文章表达清楚，语言较好，但结构有些不清晰，第二点在文章中没有展开说。时态用的有些混乱。总体不错。 Volunteer work is necessary 郭昕硕
There is no doubt that volunteer work in China has been brought into focus throughout the world. We presented so much last year, which indeed gave the world a big surprise. Our spirits, our merits, everything we showed during the grand gathering and the disaster proved that volunteer work is necessary.
As far as I am concerned. The work of helping others without payment can be of great benefit for individuals. Apart from the experience, the progress we make during the process is enough. Time permitting, we can take more responsibility outside the school and gain the pleasure.
Everyone builds our society. With the economical development, we are no longer worry about our essential needs in our life. Therefore, tospare more time and to give others a helping hand can just be the right choice. Only by this means can we get to know each other better and make contributions to our society.
Moreover, it is certain that there are still so many developing countries all over the world. From Ethiopia to DPRK, too many people are in badly demand of help. Our gerosity and warth means a lot. Furthermore, organization of all kinds about volunteer work will surely accelerate the process.
Taking the above-mentioned factors into consideration. Raising our owareness and be helpful can definitely be so necessary. The connection between us must be permanent with our efforts of volunteer work. Therefore volunteer work is not only a political world, but a lively work related to you and me. So it stands to reason that volunteer work is necessary. 专家建议：
建议作者多阅读整篇的英语文章，增强自己的“篇章感“，因为在该篇文章中存在的问题主要是段落见缺乏紧密联系，所以造成各段之间的孤立感的形成，建议作者以后写作时注意段落间的合理过渡。 专家点评： 整体结构很好，尤其第一段开门见山的明确了文章的主题，给读者非常好的第一印象。唯一不足的是第三段与上文的衔接很生硬，并且没有段落主题句，会影响文章整体的逻辑
Anyone, anytime 韩心悦
As we all know, plants cannot exist without sunshine; fish cannot live without water; and our society cannot be everlasting without volunteers. In the modern society, volunteer work is not something which requires money and knowledge anymore. It's about all of us Anyone, anytime.
Volunteer is a kind of spirit, it can bring love to everyone, everything. I remember I once went to Dichuan Province during my summer holidays, and I volunteered to help the giant pandas. One day, our 200 recepted a group of children who came from poverty-striken areas. They all seemed quite excited after they saw the lovely pandas. A little boy, however, frowned, ran towards me and whispened, “I want to help. Look at their home, it's not tidy enough. I want to clean it for them.” I was totally shocked, A boy who was in great need of helping himself actually wanted to help animals Words bursted out, “But honey, you are still too young!” He shrinked his eyes, and grinned, “Anyone, anytime.”
Dince then, “Anyone, anytime.” has become my motto. Whenever I saw rubbish on the ground, I would pick it up; whenever I saw people try to step on the grass, I would persuade them. Because I know, I'm part of the harmonious society. Harmonious society, everyone contains.
Right, harmonious society needs our volunteers. Volunteer work can make us realiz the nesponsi