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四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇一：四六级写作总结

四六级词汇及例文小结（加油哦~）

背景词汇

1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy

2.人民生活水平的显著提稳步长 the remarkable improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology

4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges

5.引起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/ draw public attention

6.有争议性的问题 a controversial issue

7.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon

关于谚语和习语引出词

正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:

引出观点的词

1. 热烈的讨论/ 争论 a heated discussion/ debate

2. 对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue

3. 一些人 „而另外一些人 „ Some people„ while others

4. 对….观点因人而异 Views on „vary from person to person.

5. 支持前/后种观点的人 people / those in favor of the former/ latter opinion

6. 有/ 提供如下理由/ 证据 have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence

7. 人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/ recognized that„

8. 完全不同的观点 a totally different argument

9. 从另一个角度 from another perspective

10. 有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

11. 可以取代 “think”

词 believe, claim, maintain, argue, insist, hold the opinion/ belief that

12. 就我而言/ 就个人而言 As far as I am concerned, / Personally,

过渡性词语 增的

1. 主要理由列举如下 The main reasons are listed as follows:

2. 考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/ consideration

3. 有利有弊 Every coin has its two sides.

4. 首先 First， Firstly， In the first place, To begin with

5. 其次 Second, Secondly, In the second place

6. 再次 Besides，In addition, Additionally, Moreover, Furthermore

7. 最后 Finally, Last but not the least, Above all, Lastly,

8. 总而言之 All in all, To sum up, In summary, In a word,

9. 与…..比较 compared with„/ in comparison with

10. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary.

11. 眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

12. 长远利益. interest in the long run

13. 利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.

14. 也不例外 ….be no exception

15. 在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

总结的语言

1. 双方的论点 arguments on both sides

2. 不可否认 It is undeniable that„/ There is no denying that„

3. 取其精髓，取其糟粕 Take the essence and discard the dregs.

4. 社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development

5. 保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society

6. 在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

7. 跟上….的最新发展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep abreast with

the latest development of …

8. 发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in„

9. 实现梦想 realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream come true

10. 我们还有很长的路要走 We still have a long way to go

关键词汇

Internet，education，society，morality, environment ,economy, character of success，school life willpower(毅力), persevere（坚持） work and healthy(工作和健康)

letter(应用文写信)

有用的词汇

1. 毫无疑问的是：there is no doubt that…

2. 开阔眼界 widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision

3. 采取有效措施来„ take effective measures to do sth.

4. 对….有益 be beneficial / conducive to„

5. 对……产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects on„

6. 对…...必不可少 be indispensable to…

7. 导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in

8. 满足需求 satisfy/ meet the needs of…

9. 责任感 / 成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement

10. 竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation

11. 学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

12. 综合素质 comprehensive quality

13. 为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society

14. 打下坚实的基础 lay a solid foundation for„

15. 经济/心理负担 financial burden / psychological burden

16. 致力于/ 投身于 be committed / devoted to„

17. 可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

18. 宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources

19. 方便快捷 convenient and efficient

20. 环保（的） environmental protection / environmentally friendly

21. 社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress

22. 理论和实践相结合 integrate theory with practice

23. 日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition

24. 有其自身的优缺点 „ has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages

25. 扬长避短 Exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones

26. 对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

27. 交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information …..的健康发

展 the healthy development of „

28. 重视 attach great importance to„

29. 社会地位 social status

30. 把时间和精力放在„上 focus time and energy on„

31. 扩大知识面 expand one’s scope of knowledge

32. 身心两方面 both physically and mentally

33. 有直接/间接关系 be directly / indirectly related to„

34. 提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal

35. 缓解压力/ 减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden

36. 优先考虑/发展„ give (top) priority to sth.

37. 代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of

38. 经不起推敲cannot hold water

39. 提供就业机会 offer job opportunities

40. 社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress

41. 毫无疑问 Undoubtedly, / There is no doubt that„

42. 增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding

43. 充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of

44. 承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure

45. 更多地强调 put more emphasis on„

46. 适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society

还有一种模板，不过我不太喜欢就不写啦。

四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇二：新概念3册对于四六级写作的重要启发

新概念3册对于四六级写作的重要启发

2015年02月07日12:12

要想在四六级作文上获得高分，就要真正培养学生英文写作的良好习惯，因此必须从日常的英文学习入手。新概念3正是这样一本与四六级写作难度相当的优秀教材。学生通过模仿以及灵活运用其中的经典句型，可以迅速提高英文写作水平，从而拿到四六级写作的高分。下面，新东方在线英语教研中心老师将为大家介绍新概念3可以在哪几个方面为考生提供提分捷径：

一 文章的逻辑性和连贯性

英语思维模式中占据主导地位的是直线型思维方式(Linearity)，这种方式起源于柏拉图和亚里士多德以及古希腊的演说历史文化。这种思维方式要求文章开宗明义，第一句话就概括出主题思想，然后再引出具体事例来发展思路，真正做到环环相扣，最后结尾处总结全文。形式上表现为：主题句——发展句——结尾句。而且英语中起连接过渡作用的词语特别多，并且这些词语出现的频率相当高，所以整篇文章的结构层次特别清晰。然而，中国人的思维方式属螺旋型，因此写作时倾向于先围绕主题外围阐述评论，然后以反复而又发展的螺旋型形式对主题展开论述。这种方式强调思维的连贯，因此很多情况下并不需要用过渡词语来表现，所以中国学生很少注意过渡词语的运用，导致写出的语段缺乏连贯性。 新概念三的文章因为过渡词语的巧妙运用使得语句连贯，过渡自然，比如： However, as the evidence began to accumulate, experts from the Zoo felt obliged to investigate, for the descriptions given by people who claimed to have seen the puma were extraordinarily similar. (Lesson1)

模仿这一句话的结构，我们可以在“Global Shortage of Energy Resources”中运用这样一句话：

However, as the world’s population is growing rapidly, we are facing the danger of running out of energy resources, for the mass waste of energy by human beings is increasing at the same time。

通过不断的模仿练习，我们将掌握各种过渡词汇的运用，从而突破以前只会写简单句的尴尬，逐渐适应写出漂亮的复杂句。不仅做到句子内部逻辑结构清楚，而且句子之间逻辑结构清晰，过渡顺畅，连接自然。

二 句式的多样性

仅仅只注意了逻辑层面的文章还是不够的，要想拿到12分以上的高分，我们必须在语言的多样性和句式的变换上下功夫。新概念三同样为我们提供了很多模仿性极强的经典句式。

1 文章开头运用同位语对所论述的核心名词进行解释

Mr. Taylor, the owner of a jewellery shop，was admiring a new window display. (Lesson6)

如果要写一篇关于环境污染的文章，我们可以这样开头

Environmental pollution, a phenomenon which lasted a number of years, has grown more and more serious。

2 以副词开头的句子

平时写文章我们习惯于副词紧靠所修饰的动词，殊不知灵活运用副词可以使文章的表达增色不少。

Inevitably you arrive at your destination almost exhausted. (Lesson 44)

在一篇关于能源问题的文章中，我们可以运用以副词开头的句子。 Eventually our natural resources, however abundant, will run out。

3 以介词短语开头的句子

In democratic countries any efforts to restrict the freedom of the press are rightly condemned. (Lesson 45)

在论文中，我们通常会写“不同的人对于所议论的这个问题有着不同的看法”这句话：

In discussing this problem, different people have different opinions。

4 当句子的主语、宾语过长时，我们可以使用it充当形式主语、形式宾语，从而平衡句子结构。

It is disturbing to think that a dangerous wild animal is still at large in the quiet countryside. (Lesson 1) (it充当形式主语)

当我们要批驳一个错误观点时，我们可以这样表达

It is hard to believe that some people should have such a stupid idea。

Radio and television have made it possible for advertisers to capture the attention of millions of people in this way. (Lesson 26) (it充当形式宾语)

以“Getting to know the world outside the campus”为题目的作文中，我们可以这样开头

With the development of our society, the campus is no longer an “ivory tower” and students find it hard to confine themselves to the campus。

5 独立主格结构用在描述型的文章中可以使表达更生动。

The silence was suddenly broken when a large car, with its headlights on and its horn blaring, roared down the arcade. (Lesson 6)

要描述一个月黑风高的夜晚，我们可以这样写

With the breeze becoming stronger and the moonlight giving the lake a sinister appearance, the night grew more dangerous。

6 分词的运用令文章行文简洁，明快。

Not wanting to frighten the poor man, Mrs. Richards quickly hid in the small storeroom under the stairs. (Lesson 13)(现在分词作状语表示原因)

在“How I Finance My College Education”中可以这样写

Not wanting to seek help from the loan programs, I decided to offer instruction as a tutor。

三 使用形象的修辞语言

修辞是加强表达效果的一种语言手段。灵活运用修辞不仅可以使文章的内容更加形象化具体化，而且可以提升文章的档次，给予阅卷老师良好的印象。 1 比喻：这是最常见的修辞方式，是对两种具有共同特性的事物或现象进行类比的一种修辞手法。

It was as clear as daylight then that burglars had forced an entry during her absence. (Lesson58)

我们在描述学生的生活很忙碌时可以使用比喻的修辞手法

They are as busy as a bee。

2 夸张：夸张是以超越实际的概念烘托或渲染所要强调的事物的一种修辞手法。

We resolve to get up earlier each morning, eat less, find more time to play with the children, do a thousand and one jobs about the house,… (Lesson 50)

在文章中提到两个差别很大的观点时，为了使表达更加形象而生动我们可以这样写：

These two opinions are different from each other in a thousand and one ways。

四 语言的美感

新概念的文章不但结构清晰，行文流畅，而且语言极富表现力和感染力，令人体会到英语本身风情万种的一面。阅读并且模仿这样的文章，不仅可以提高我们对于英文写作的兴趣，而且可以提升我们的英文功底。

Nothing can be compared, he maintains, with the first cockcrow, the twittering of birds at dawn, the sight of the rising sun glinting on the trees and pastures. (Lesson 41)

这一连串的描述生动地向我们展示了一幅黎明时分的田园风光。模仿这一句话，我们可以描写一个英俊的男子：

Nothing can be compared with his bright eyes, great nose, red lips, and broad shoulders。

如果我们稍作改动，把“broad shoulders”改成“supple knees”，那这句话就可以用来描绘一个美丽的女子。

依靠新概念三来提高我们的写作水平和技巧犹如站在巨人的肩膀上，它可以令我们站得更高，看得更远。

四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇三：四六级作文讲解

四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇四：四六级作文写作模板

四六级作文写作模板

-考前一周必备必过作文突破

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写作模板——图表式作文

It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of „(多少).

What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are „ (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, „(第一个原因). More importantly, „(第二个原因). Most important of all, „(第三个原因). 写作模板——提纲式作文

1． 对立观点式

A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？

B． 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？

C．我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。

However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。

There is some truth in both arguments. But I think t „„

英语四六级写作试题模板——辩论式议论文

Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.

More importantly, 论据2.

Most important of all, 论据3.

In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

主题句作文：是指按照所给出的题目和段落所给出的第一句进行续写，完成段落。主题句作文一般由三段组成

例如：Money

（1）Money is regarded by some people as the most impotant thing in life.__________For those people,a man with plenty of money can live happily.For example,only rich man can afford expensive cars and luxurious houses.„„„„

(2)But money cannot buy everything.___________For instance,no matter how much money one has,he cannot buy good health,which is essential to a good life.Neither can be buy happiness or

friendship.Thus,although money is useful in many ways,there are still a lot of things „„„„

(3)There are people who ganmble or cheat to obtain money.____________Those people try to get money by dishonest means.Sooner or later,they will be punished by the law.For them,money will bring them nothing but misery.Only when money is obtained through working can it make people really happy.

主题句作文，应注意（1）应紧扣主题句的思想，主题句是整个段落的主导思想，它支配着整个段落内容的发展，啊主题句思想的详细阐述；（

2）理解每一个主题句的内容，在写主题句作文时，要从短文的整体结构来考虑各段的内容，并理解和把握各个段落之间的逻辑关系。 大学英语四级考试十二句作文法

大学四级考试写作的评分依据是：文章切切题，条理清楚，语言准确和字数符合要求。所谓切题就是看你写的作文跑不跑题。所谓条理是每一段的议论的正反清楚，描述的时间正确。语言准确要求作文的语法词汇使用正确，符合英语表达习惯。四级作文的字数要求不少于100字。针对四级考试的作文要求我们提出十二句作文法，这里所说的十二句作文法不仅包括一般英文写作的方法而且包括一套行之有效的写作方法。它的具体内容有以下几点。

一 审题

我们拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是审题。审题的作用在于使你写作不跑题（如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）那末审题要审什麽呢？

1．体裁（议论文，说明文，描述文）

审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什末样的体裁就会用什末样的题材去写。那末体裁包括那些呢？

它包括议论文，说明文和描述文。从近些年看，四级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如： Directions: For this part ,your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student .You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below :

１.做合格大学生的必要性

２.做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）

３.我计划这样做

很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写“...必要性”，这说明本段体裁是议论文；第二段要求写“

...必备条件”，这说明本段要求写说明文；儿地三段要求写“...这样做”，这说明本段要求写描述文。所以在大多数情形下，四级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。

2．根据不同体裁确定写作方法

我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体，第二段为说明体，地三段为描述体。而各种文体又不同的写作方式： 议论文；要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两方面来论述。例如上面第一段的思路是：做合格大学生，会怎末样（这是从正面论述）；不能做合格的大学生，会怎末样（从反面论述）；所以我们要做合格的大学生（结了论）。

说明文：可以从几方面或几条来说明一个问题，就上作文而言，可以从方面（德智体）来说明合格大学生的必要性。

描述文：一“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。与上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词，他要与

第二段相互应进行描述。 二 确定主题句

通过审题，我们知道该如何确定正确的写作思路。下边我们就谈如何些。第一部就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。例如上述三段主题句分别为：

１.It is very necessary to be a good university student . （议论体的主题句）

２.There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student .（说明体的主题句）

３.What I will do in the future is the following .(描述体主题句)

如果要求句是英语就可以把它变成主题句，例如这样一篇作文：

Good Health

１.Importance of good health

２.Ways to keep fit

３.My own practice

这样的作文的要求句就可以扩充成主题句。扩充后三段的主题句分别为：

１.It is very important to have good health .（将名词 importance变成形容词important） ２.There are four ways to keep fit for me .（用 there be 句型）

３.My own practices are the following .（采用原词）

三 确保文章条理清楚

保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚，对于描述文来说，谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good health 来说，第

一段保持正反面要清楚救应这样写：正面（With good health ,we can...），反面（Without good health ,we can do nothing .We can’t do...）

为了使文章更具有条理性，我们可以用first(ly) second(ly) third(ly)等副词，他们可以是文章的条例性更加突出。作文是主观题，想得告分就必须引起老师的主意，老师的时间很短（每篇作文只有一两分钟就要阅完），所以我们在列调试最好不用: To be with,... after that ,...And then, ... The next , ... The following , ... As last ... 。因为用这样的词语不利于老师看出你作文的条理性。

四 保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法

考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题，一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。

我们知道，四级作文都是三段式。我们算一下，如果我们在每一段中写上四句，即主题句加两三句扩展句和一个结论句就可以了。这样全片在十二句左右，每一句十多个词，就又120-150个字。大家可以试图找一些作文题练一练。

学英语四六级考试万能作文试题模板

提纲式模块

（I）说明原因型

模块（一）

Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated

that ( 1 ).

Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows.

The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).

To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) .

It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing ,( 6 ).

On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce th „„

四十二天学会英语的模范短文

第一天：THE NEWSPAPER 报 纸

Nowadays the newspaper possesses considerable value Everybody should read it. It supplies us with a variety of news every day. It tells us the political situation of the world. If we form the habit of reading the newspaper, we shall (will) get enough knowledge to cope with our circumstances. 现今报纸拥有极大的价值，人人都应该看它。它每天提供我们各种类类的消息。它告诉我们世界政治局势。如果我们养成看报的习惯，我们就能得到足够的知识来因应我们的环境。

学生虽然每天须做功课，但他们至少应该匀出一两个小时来看报。哪些，他们不但能增加知识而且也能赶上时代。总而言之，看报对学生很有益处。

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第二天：MY DAILY LIFE 我的日常生活

Though my daily life is extremely monotonous, I try hard to adapt myself to it. Why? Because I intend to be a good student. I wish to render service to my country.

I get up at six o’clock every day. After I wash my face and brush my teeth, I begin to review my lessons. I go to school at seven o’clock.

After school is over, I return home. We usually have supper at seven o’clock.

Then I begin to do my homework. I want to finish it before I go to bed.

虽然我的日常生活十分单调，但我却竭力设法去适应它。为什么？因为我打算做一个好学生，希望将来为国家服务。

我每天六点起床、洗脸刷牙后，就开始复习功课，七点钟我就去上学。

放学后，我就回家了。我们通常在七点钟吃晚餐，之后我就开始做家庭作业，希望在睡觉前把它做完。 --------------------------------------------------------------------------------

第三天：A MODEL STUDENT 模范学生

Do you mind being called a bad student? Of course not. So far as I know, everybody intends to be (become) a model student.

However, to be a model student is by no means an easy thing. First, he must do his best to obtain knowledge. A man without sufficient knowledge will not succeed. Secondly, he must remember to improve his health. Only a strong man can do great tasks. Thirdly, he should receive moral education. If his conduct is not good, no one will consider making friends with him.

你价意被称为坏学生吗？当然不。就我所知，每个人都打算做模范学生。然而，做模范学生却不容易。第一，他必须尽力获得知识（求知）。

一个没有足够知识的人是不会成功的。第二，他必须记住促进健康。只有强壮的人才能做大事。第三，他应该接受道德教育。如果他品行不好，没有人会考虑和他交朋友的。

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第四天：HOW TO GET HAPPINESS 如何获得快乐

There is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points.

First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness). Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life.

Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress.

无疑的快乐是世界上最宝贵的东西。没有它，人生将是空虚的而且毫无意义的。如果你希望知道如何获得

四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇五：大学英语四六级考试作文范文

大学英语四级考试作文范文—期末口语考试题目

范文1 Salary or Interest？

1. 有的人找工作的时候选择兴趣，有的选择工资

2. 你的看法

●审题概述●这是一篇要求考生评判找工作时所持标准的文章。开篇需阐述两种不同的观点，有人认为兴趣重要，有人则把工资摆在第一位。对于大学生而言，结合自身的情况，可以表明自己的观点。第一段，分述两种不同的观点，稍加展开；第二段，就自身谈谈看法。

【范文】 Salary or Interest

Upon graduation，virtually all college students will confront the problem of the career choice. It is truly a tough choice. Students’ opinions differ greatly on this issue. Some hold that priority should be given to their interest in jobs，but others take the attitude that salary is the most critical factor influencing their career choices.

As to myself，I prefer the latter view. A well paid job exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people，with no exception to me. Although it might be impossible to measure the value of one’s job in terms of money，salary counts most when I choose my future career. In my view，our career choices largely depend on how and where we have been brought up. I come from a poor urban family and my parents were both laid off workers. In order to finance my tuition，they have been working hard over the past four years. As the only son in my family，I have to shoulder the burden of supporting my family. In short，salary is the first and only consideration in my choice of career.

◇第一段思路点评：就大学生找工作时所持标准问题，阐述了两种不同的观点。

◇语言点提示：（1）此句式priority should be given to something（应优先考虑……），牢记。

（2）注意分述不同观点时，可使用不同的动词或动词短语，这样可以避免重复，如： hold， take the attitude。 ◇第二段思路点评：以己为例，表明观点。

◇语言点提示：（1）exert … on 对……施加

(2) finance my tuition 承担我的学费

范文2 Choosing an Occupation

1. 选择职业是一个人要面对的众多难题之一。

2. 需要花时间去选择职业。

3. 选择职业时可以向多人寻求建议和帮助。

●审题概述●这是一篇关于如何选择职业这一问题的文章。第一段，简单描述一个人要面临很多难题，选择职业只是其中之一；第二段，选择职业不可马虎，这是件耗时耗力的事情，需认真对待；第三段，选择职业时，可参考别人的建议和意见。

【范文】 Choosing an Occupation

One of the most important problems a young person faces is deciding what to do. There are some people, of course, who from the time they are six years old “know” that they want to be doctors or pilots or fire fighters, but the majority of us do not get around to making a decision about an occupation or career until somebody or something forces us to face the problem.

Choosing an occupation takes time, and there are a lot of things you have to think about as you try to decide what you would like to do. You may find that you will have to take special courses to qualify for a particular kind of work, or you may find out that you will need to get actual work experience to gain enough knowledge to qualify for a particular job. Fortunately, there are a lot of people you can turn to for advice and help in making your decision. At most schools, there are teachers who are professionally qualified to give you detailed information about job qualifications. And you can talk over your ideas with family members and friends who are always ready to listen and to offer suggestions.

◇第一段思路点评：简要描述选择职业只是一个人所面临的众多难题之一。

◇语言点提示：get around to sth.开始考虑某事。

◇第二段思路点评:选择职业是件耗时的事情，而且在做出选择之前，你得做很多的准备工作，这样才有可能找到心仪的工作。

◇语言点提示：qualify for有资格从事。

◇第三段思路点评：在做选择的时候，也可参考老师、家人和朋友的意见。

◇语言点提示：be qualified to give有资格提供。

范文3 Certificate Craze on Campus

1．近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”

2．产生这一现象的原因 3．你的看法

●审题概述●大学生热衷于考证这一话题一直是社会的热点，为什么会出现这样的现象。对于大学生而言，结合自身的情况，可以表明自己的观点。第一段，简要描述现象：大学校园内出现“考证热”；第二段，探究产生这种现象的原因；第三段，结合自身情况，阐述自己的观点。

【范文】 Certificate Craze on Campus

In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing; quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?

There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person’s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.

From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove one’s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.

◇第一段思路点评：简要描述现象：大学生们热衷于考证。

◇语言点提示：此句Why does this craze appear?作为过渡，引出下文。

◇第二段思路点评：解释出现这一现象的原因，注意所使用的连接词语：first, second。

◇语言点提示：the admission expansion of colleges 高校扩招

◇第三段思路点评：以自己为例，具体说明。

◇语言点提示：(1) nothing but=only

(2) focus on/upon=concentrate on/upon

范文4 Craze for Civil Service Examinations

1. 现在有越来越多的大学毕业生报考公务员 2. 引起此现象的原因 3. 你的看法

● 审题概述●本文是一篇论述大学生报考公务员人数增多的原因和对此的看法。第一段，主要综述大学生报考公务员增多的现象。第二段，侧重分析引起此现象的原因。第三段，重点谈自己对此的观点 ● 【范文】 Craze for Civil Service Examinations

Every year hundreds of thousands of people in China take civil service exams conducted at various levels in the hope of becoming government employees. Among them, college graduates are a fast-growing force that can’t be ignored. The craze for being a civil servant is not limited to liberal arts majors, as it’s also gaining popularity among science and engineering students.

In the final analysis, this growing trend among the youngsters is mainly attributable to two factors – ambitions and comforts. On one hand, many ambitious college graduates view these exams as a springboard to a higher social status, greater power and prestige, on which many of their other wishes rest. On the other, as being a civil servant generally means a stable income, enviable healthcare and pension programs, as well as other comforts of life, it’s quite an appealing career option to many people, especially in this age of sluggish world economy.

Personally, the desire to be a government official is beyond reproach, as the nation and the people do need an injection of new blood into the civil service sectors. The fresh-faced college graduates, armed with lofty ideals, new vision, and strong drive, are undoubtedly among the best candidates. ◇第一段思路点评：第一句总述人们蜂拥参加公务员招考，第二句点明大学生是其中的主力军，第三句再述热衷于公务员报考的大学生不仅有文科的，还有理工科的。 ◇第二段思路点评：先总述引起大学生热衷报考公务员的两点因素，再详细分述。

◇语言点提示：（1）On one hand…On the other起到衔接上下文作用

（2）is attributable to归因于 （3）sluggish world economy衰退的世界经济

(4) beyond reproach无可厚非 (5) liberal arts majors文科专业学生

◇第三段思路点评：重点谈对大学生热衷报考公务员的观点。

范文5 Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

1. 现在社会上有各种各样的培训班你的观点你的观点 2 你的观点

3.有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有必要

● 审题概述●这是一篇主要论述对社会上各类培训班看法的文章。第一段，概述各种各样培训班的状况。

第二段，论述人们对参加课外培训班的不同看法。第三段，重点阐述你对此的看法。

【范文】 Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes?

All across the country a great diversity of custom-made classes are mushrooming, in which special training is provided concerning computer skills, arts, sports, and other extracurricular specialties like maths and writing. Among them language crash courses for various tests, such as CET, BEC, TOFEL, IELTS, GRE and so forth, are especially noticeable for its wide range and high attendance rate.

Some consider it advisable to attend such classes while others believe it unnecessary. The former argues that it’s far more effective to command these special skills with the help of an experienced trainer than to work at them on their own. They are convinced that these training classes can make up for what is not taught in school, hence more competitive edge over their peers. The latter group of people, nonetheless, criticizes it as a sheer waste of resources. They warn that the quality of most training courses is questionable, as they are marketed to get money out of our pocket rather than insert knowledge into our head.

As far as I am concerned, a little bit of such special training does us no harm, but too much of it can only prove to be counter-productive. Anyhow, the deprived free time can be better invested in recreation at weekends, talking to an old friend, or simply enjoying a long-overdue vacation.

◇第一段思路点评：第一句综述社会上提供知识、技能服务的各类培训班雨后春笋般兴起，第二句例举语言速成课程特别火爆。◇第二段思路点评：先用一个对比句式摆出两种不同的观点，再分别详述他们的看法。◇第三段思路点评：辩证地论述自己对参加各类培训班的看法。

◇语言点提示：1）a great diversity of各种各样的 2）mushrooming迅速扩散、增加3）language crash courses语言速成课程4）连接词语while，the former，they，the latter group of people等的使用，强化了上下文

的连贯性。5）as far as I am concerned我认为，就我而言6）counter-productive适得其反的、事与愿违的

四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇六：四六级写作套路(刘晓艳老师主编)

四六级写作套路（刘晓艳主编）

（文登考研）

（刘晓艳，原新东方首席主讲名师，考研英语语法长句难句教学体系创建者，现任文登考研独家授课核心讲师。誉满山城的考研英语辅导名师，英语语言文学研究知名学者,她多年从事考研英语辅导，学术功底深厚，教学经验丰富，语言彪悍，授课把握重点干净利落，考点讲解清晰，深受广大学子喜爱。）

一 观点对比型文章

下面我们以下面的题目为例，来讲解观点对比型文章的写法。

养宠物 有些人认为养宠物很好

有些人认为养宠物不好

你的观点是什么？

本文共分三段。

第一段（3—4句话）

第一句话：提出主题

比如：

1. Recently with the development /advance/progress of science and technology, the phenomenon of pets has aroused wide concern.

2. Nowadays, it is undeniable that pets has almost become the biggest concern of the present-day world.

第二句话：翻译第一个提纲

比如：a part of citizens cling to the idea that keeping pets is beneficial to their daily life.

第三第四句话具体说明原委，为什么养宠物好

比如：

1. first, keeping pets can reduce the loneliness of many people ,especially the old and the children, who have to stay alone.

2. in addition, the pets are lovely, they can make you feel delighted when you go back to home. 第二段（3—4句话）

第一句话：过度语

比如：although the former is reasonable to some people, there are still these who claim that having animals at home is unacceptable.

第二句话：翻译第二个提纲

比如：they are of the opinion that keeping pets should be banned.

第三第四句话：说明原委，为什么养宠物不好。

比如：

1． On one hand, they will give rise to serious pollution, which exists not only at their onwers’family but also the public places.

2． On the other hand. Not only will they be responsible for some injuries to the

innocent children but also lead to some terrible noise which can be horrible at night. 三段（3—4句话）

第一句话翻译第三个提纲：

比如：Personally, I insist that keeping pets is a two-edged weapon which can be used for good or evil.

第二句话具体论述

比如I intend to stand on the side that pets is our friends, without them. We would witness a gloomy future.

第三句话总结： In conclusion , it is high time we poured attention into the phenomenon—feeding pets.

这样，一篇观点对比性文章就写出来了。不管主题是什么，只需要变换一下中心词罢了。

二 解决问题型作文：

同样，写成三段，分别是提出问题，分析问题，解决问题。

第一段（2—3句话）

第一句话：提出主题 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious problem. Fake

advertisements have become a concern of the public.

第二和第三句话：举例或数据列举：

Although there are countless illustrations arround us,the following one is sufficient. Not only on TV but also on newspapers can we find dozens of bad ads which are cheating the consumers.

第二段（4—5句话）

第一句话：翻译提纲二（一般说一个东西的危害性是什么？） Fake advertisements definitely have led to some consequences.

第二句—第五句：具体危害

First and foremost, individuals may buy some bad food and drink. It is really unfavorable for their health. Besides, some old people like to buy

medicine，Sometimes, which are harmful. Last but not least, the enterprise of fake advertisements can earn much illegal money. It will cause serious problems in government and the society.

三段（3—4句话）

第一句话翻译提纲三（一般是如何解决问题） To alleviate this problem, we are hoped to take effective measures. 第二句三句话写如何具体如何解决

On the one hand, the government must control a multitude of

advertisement in media, and find out fake advertisement in them. On the other hand, people ought to learn how to identify fake advertisement. So fake enterprises cannot earn profits from individuals anymore. 第四句话 总结

Only in this way can we have a harmonious life.

补充： 观点对比性

n第一段：

n第一句：引出主题

1.Nowadays, there is a hot debate about…/an increasing interest in…;

2 Recently the issue /problem of…has been in the limelight / brought into focus/ brought to public attentive concern…

3. Recently with the development/advance/progress of science and technology, the phenomenon of … has aroused wide concern

4 Nowadays, it is undeniable that……has almost become the biggest concern of the present-day world.

5 what is your idea as to …? There exist varying/ a variety of points concerning it.

6 others, by contrast ,fail to approve of the former argument, they cling to the point that

n第二句：

n some people are in favor of the idea that (一方观点)

n第三句 they claim that

n第四句 they also think that

第四段

接着过渡

1.However, other people stand on adifferent ground

2.Although the former point is reasonable, there are those who claim that

3.By contrast, other people fail to approve the former point

第三段

第一句 个人观点

As far as I am concerned, there is some truth in both arguments, but I prefer the latter one/agree with the latter one/I think the latter one is better. n第二句

n1.under no circumstances can we fail to pour attention into the

importance /seriousness of sth.

n2. it is high time we poured attention into the issue of sth.

n3 it is sth that plays an essential role in our study and life

n4 it is sth that really has a great influence on our study and life.

第三句话

呼吁喊口号：

n I believe that a happy and bright future is awaiting us if we make every effort to promote(好事)/ ban (坏事)

n We do, in fact, have a long way to reach our final goal, but achieving something remains well within the realm of possibility.

nOnly in this way can we

解决问题型作文

第一段：

n引出主题

二段 原因或危害分析

第一句话：fake and shoddy goods are harmful in the following ways.

It is widely acknowledged that there exist a variety of harm in the following ways

n第二 三 四句话：

n1 it breaks the concerning laws and regulations of our nation.

n it is a waste of resources and pollute the environment in which we live n affects the rapid development of our economy.

n do harm to the construction of the harmonious society

n2 It will bring great /unnecessary loss to (集体）the companies which produce quality products

n3. It will waste a lot of money of us who spend much on it.

nIt does harm to our health or even our lives that is so precious.

表示原因的写法

a host of elements can account for the phenomenon/situation;

Why do I hold the point? There exist several factors accounting for/contributing to my outlook.

三段

in conclusion, the issue is so that it is urgent/ important/ necessary

that appropriate/ effective/ proper action be taken to end/ correct/ improve… There are believed / expected / supposed to be two effective measures/ practical schemes（计划方案）, one of which is… the other is that…

4. It is suggested/ recommended/ hoped that continuous /great/ persistent efforts should be made to halt/control …

n二句话 三句话 具体措施

n1 we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control… for

another, we should cultivate the awareness that sth is of great significance to us.

n2 The essential solution, in my opinion, is to make strict laws by the government. napart from this, people’s awareness must be heightened through education and publicity.

三句 喊口号

公务书信 表示感谢

My thanks to you for your generous assistance are beyond words.

Words fail me when I desire to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kind consideration my requirement/application/complaint.

nC I take the opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation for your generous assistance you rendered me

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四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇七：四六级写作专题

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四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇九：新东方老师总结四六级作文模板

写作模板——提纲式作文

模版1

Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.

There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.

More importantly, 论据2.

Most important of all, 论据3.

In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

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People hold different views about X. Some people are of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, 论据1.

For another, 论据2.

Last but not the least, 论据3.

To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

模版3

There is no consensus of opinions among people about X（争论的焦点）。Some people are of the view that 观点1，while others take an opposite side, firmly believing that 观点2。As far as I am concerned, the former/latter notion is preferable in many senses. The reasons are obvious.

First of all, 论据1。

Furthermore, 论据2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is, 论据3。

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。

As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

四级作文写作模板

写作模板——图表式作文

It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years (as X varies). At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of „(多少).

What is the reason for this change? Mainly there are „ (多少) reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all, „(第一个原因). More importantly, „(第二个原因). Most important of all, „(第三个原因). 写作模板——提纲式作文

1． 对立观点式

A．有人认为X 是好事，赞成X， 为什么？

B． 有人认为X 是坏事， 反对X，为什么？

C．我的看法。

Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。

However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。 An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。

There is some truth in both arguments. But I think t „„

英语四六级写作试题模板——辩论式议论文

Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea.

There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1.

More importantly, 论据2.

Most important of all, 论据3.

In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心.

或 From above, we can predict that 预测.

主题句作文：是指按照所给出的题目和段落所给出的第一句进行续写，完成段落。主题句作文一般由三段组成

例如：Money

（1）Money is regarded by some people as the most impotant thing in life.__________For those people,a man with plenty of money can live happily.For example,only rich man can afford expensive cars and luxurious houses.„„„„

(2)But money cannot buy everything.___________For instance,no matter how much money one has,he cannot buy good health,which is essential to a good life.Neither can be buy happiness or

friendship.Thus,although money is useful in many ways,there are still a lot of things „„„„

(3)There are people who ganmble or cheat to obtain money.____________Those people try to get money by dishonest means.Sooner or later,they will be punished by the law.For them,money will bring them nothing but misery.Only when money is obtained through working can it make people really happy.

主题句作文，应注意（1）应紧扣主题句的思想，主题句是整个段落的主导思想，它支配着整个段落内容的发展，啊主题句思想的详细阐述；（

2）理解每一个主题句的内容，在写主题句作文时，要从短文的整体结构来考虑各段的内容，并理解和把握各个段落之间的逻辑关系。 大学英语四级考试十二句作文法

大学四级考试写作的评分依据是：文章切切题，条理清楚，语言准确和字数符合要求。所谓切题就是看你写的作文跑不跑题。所谓条理是每一段的议论的正反清楚，描述的时间正确。语言准确要求作文的语法词汇使用正确，符合英语表达习惯。四级作文的字数要求不少于100字。针对四级考试的作文要求我们提出十二句作文法，这里所说的十二句作文法不仅包括一般英文写作的方法而且包括一套行之有效的写作方法。它的具体内容有以下几点。

一 审题

我们拿到作文后第一件要做的事就是审题。审题的作用在于使你写作不跑题（如果跑题，条理和语言再好，也得不到及格分，甚至0分。）那末审题要审什麽呢？

1．体裁（议论文，说明文，描述文）

审题就是要审作文的题材和体裁。因为什末样的体裁就会用什末样的题材去写。那末体裁包括那些呢？

它包括议论文，说明文和描述文。从近些年看，四级作文不是单一的体裁，而是几种体裁的杂合体。例如： Directions: For this part ,your are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Trying to Be A Good University Student .You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese ) below :

１.做合格大学生的必要性

２.做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）

３.我计划这样做

很多人说这种类型的作文是议论文。这是片面的，因为，第一段要求写“...必要性”，这说明本段体裁是议论文；第二段要求写“

...必备条件”，这说明本段要求写说明文；儿地三段要求写“...这样做”，这说明本段要求写描述文。所以在大多数情形下，四级作文是三种体裁的杂合体。

2．根据不同体裁确定写作方法

我们审题的目的就是根据不同体裁确定不同的写作方法。通过审题，我们可以看出四级作文大都是三段式。如上例第一段为议论体，第二段为说明体，地三段为描述体。而各种文体又不同的写作方式： 议论文；要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两方面来论述。例如上面第一段的思路是：做合格大学生，会怎末

样（这是从正面论述）；不能做合格的大学生，会怎末样（从反面论述）；所以我们要做合格的大学生（结了论）。

说明文：可以从几方面或几条来说明一个问题，就上作文而言，可以从方面（德智体）来说明合格大学生的必要性。

描述文：一“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。与上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词，他要与

第二段相互应进行描述。 二 确定主题句

通过审题，我们知道该如何确定正确的写作思路。下边我们就谈如何些。第一部就是要写主题句。主题句是确保不跑题的前提，只有不跑题才有可得及格分。写主题句嘴保险的方法就是把中文提纲的各句译成英语。例如上述三段主题句分别为：

１.It is very necessary to be a good university student . （议论体的主题句）

２.There are several respects of necessities to be a good university student .（说明体的主题句）

３.What I will do in the future is the following .(描述体主题句)

如果要求句是英语就可以把它变成主题句，例如这样一篇作文：

Good Health

１.Importance of good health

２.Ways to keep fit

３.My own practice

这样的作文的要求句就可以扩充成主题句。扩充后三段的主题句分别为：

１.It is very important to have good health .（将名词 importance变成形容词important） ２.There are four ways to keep fit for me .（用 there be 句型）

３.My own practices are the following .（采用原词）

三 确保文章条理清楚

保证不跑提示写作当中第一任务，第二个重要任务就是要做到条理清楚。对于议论文来说，正反面要清楚，对于说明文来说条理要清楚，对于描述文来说，谁干什么要清楚。就拿上例Good health 来说，第一段保持正反面要清楚救应这样写：正面（With good health ,we can...），反面（Without good health ,we can do nothing .We can’t do...）

为了使文章更具有条理性，我们可以用first(ly) second(ly) third(ly)等副词，他们可以是文章的条例性更加突出。作文是主观题，想得告分就必须引起老师的主意，老师的时间很短（每篇作文只有一两分钟就要阅完），所以我们在列调试最好不用: To be with,... after that ,...And then, ... The next , ... The following , ... As last ... 。因为用这样的词语不利于老师看出你作文的条理性。

四 保证作文符合字数要求的十二句作文法

考生一般都希望作文达到字数而又不至于写得太多，因为写得太多一方面暴露自己语言上的弱点，另一方面又会占用过多的时间。写得太多还易跑题，一个有效的方法就是十二句作文法。

四六级写作学生老师对教育的观点看法篇十：四六级写作技巧

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