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　　2016年大同市中考成绩和高中录取分数线公告　　我市2016年中考成绩于7月7日揭晓，全市高中学校招生录取分数线已划定，现将考生成绩、录取分数线及有关事项予以公布。　　一、考生成绩和录取学校查询　　参加2016年中考考生登录大同教育信息网(WWW.DTSEDU.COM)点击“中考考务”，输入考生报名号(或准考证号)、登录密码，点击“考生登录”后进入中考招生管理系统进行成绩查询和高中录取学校查询。　　二、考生申请查卷　　查卷工作由市招生办统一组织进行。查卷限于主观卷错评、漏评、合分错误。考生对主观卷成绩有异议的，可于7月10日前到毕业学校提出申请、填写考生《查卷申请表》，逾期不予受理。查卷现场不接待考生及家长。　　三、录取考生报到　　7月9日至12日为全市各高中录取考生统一报到时间(大同三中、大同四中因9日下午、10日上午考试，不安排录取考生报到，报到时间至13日)。考生携带准考证到录取学校报到。逾期不报到的考生,将视为自行放弃录取资格。　　四、高中学校录取分数线

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山西省大同市2016高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编(6)

山西大同市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选编（6）

书面表达(满分25分)

假如你是李华，英国交换生Anna将来你校学习中文并住在你家（幸福路58号）, 请你应她

的要求，根据下图介绍你家周边的

情况，以便她初步了解在中国的生

活。

注意;

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计

入总词数。

Dear Anna,

I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home.

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I can’t wait to see you in China.

Yours

Li Hua

【参考范文】One possible version:

Dear Anna,

I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home.

My home is at No.58, Xingfu Road, just opposite a bank. A five-minute walk from my

home along Xingfu Road westward will bring you to a crossroads, where Xingfu Road meets

Youyi Street. On the southeast corner of the crossroads lies a shopping mall, where

you can get everything you need. Walk north for about 300 meters, along Youyi Street,

and you’ll see our school on the right. There we will spend most of the daytime. At

the east end of Xingfu road stands the new railway station and it’s easy to reach,

as a bus stop is just next to my home and No.26 or No.46 bus will directly take you

there.

I can’t wait to see you in China.

Yours

Li Hua

【吉林省吉林市2014质量检测】

书面表达（满分25分）

假如你是荣光中学的学生李华，你偶然看到在你市求学的美国学生Tom在网上发帖，要

大家给他推荐一本学习汉语的书。你手头正好有一本合适的书可以借给他。请你给他发一封电

子邮件，要点如下：

1.说明写信原因； 2.描述书的情况； 3.约定见面时间和地点。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I’m Li Hua, a student of Rongguang Middle School.

Yours,

Li Hua

【参考范文】书面表达：（满分25分）One possible version

Dear Tom,

I’m Li Hua, a student of Rongguang Middle School. I learned quite by chance that

you needed a book to improve your Chinese. I happen to have one, which I think might

help you.

The book, entitled New Practical Chinese, is intended for beginners at your level.

Not only does it include the basic conversations in our daily life, it is also a window

through which you can get to know Chinese culture and customs. Edited by three language

experts, it is widely used by many foreign learners.

If it is convenient to you, let’s meet at the entrance to Jiangnan Park at 3

p.m. this Sunday. If not, try to find another time that is suitable for both of us.

Yours,

Li Hua

【福建省福州市2014高考英语3月质检试题】书面表达(满分25分)

“百善孝为先"是中国人的传统美德。请根据以下提示，谈谈你对“孝”的理解。

提示：

1．你认为“孝”是什么?

2．以你自己或身边人的事例说明。

注意：

1．文章开头已给出，不计人总词

2．文中不得透露个人和学校信息；

3．词数1 20左右；

4．参考词汇：孝顺filial piety

It is universally accepted that filial piety is an important virtue in China．

一、评分原则

1．本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分；

2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确

定或调整档次，最后给分；

3．词数少于100和多于150的，从总分中减去2分；

4．评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的

连贯性；

5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；

6．如书写较差以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。

二、内容要点

1. “孝”是什么；

2. 举例说明；

3. 总结。

三、各档次的给分范围和要求

大同市信息教育网2016考生登录处(四)
山西省大同市2016高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编(5)

【大同市信息教育网2016考生登录处】

山西大同市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选编（5）

读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）

阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Once upon a time in a land far away, there was a wonderful old man who loved everything：animals, spiders, insects...

One day while walking through the woods the nice old man found a cocoon（茧）of a butterfly. He took it home. A few days later, a small opening appeared; he sat and watched the butterfly for several hours as it struggled to force its body through that little hole. Then it seemed to stop making any progress. It appeared as if it had gotten as far as it could and it could go no farther.

Then the man decided to help the butterfly, so he took a pair of scissors and cut off the remaining bit of the cocoon.

The butterfly then came out with ease.【大同市信息教育网2016考生登录处】

But it had a swollen body and small, shriveled（萎缩的）wings. The man continued to watch the butterfly because he expected that, at any moment, the wings would enlarge and expand to be able to support the body. Neither happened! In fact, the butterfly spent the rest of its life crawling around with a swollen body and shriveled wings. It never was able to fly.

What the kind-hearted man did not understand was that the restricting cocoon and the struggle required for the butterfly to get through the tiny opening were Nature's way of forcing fluid（液体）from the body of the butterfly into its wings so that it would be ready for flight once it achieved its freedom from the cocoon.

Sometimes struggles are exactly what we need in our life. If we were allowed to go through our life without any hardships, it would fail us. We would not be as strong as what we could have been. And we could never fly.

【写作内容】

1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2.以约120个词就“个人成长需要艰难生活的磨砺”的主题发表看法，至少包含以下内容要点：

（1）你读了这个故事的感受；

（2）叙述当前父母溺爱子女的现象和由此造成的后果；

（3）假如你是父母的一方，你会如何磨砺自己的孩子？

【写作要求】

1.你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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【参考范文】读写任务：One possible version:

A kind man cut a cocoon open in order to lessen/ ease/ relieve the pain of a butterfly when he saw it struggling out of the coccon, only to find that it could never fly because of his help.

The story sets me thinking a lot. Our life is more or less like this. Sometimes, struggles or obstacles in our life are a must for our growth. It is these struggles or hardships that increase our willpower and contribute to our success. Without these

trials, we could never achieve our life goal just as the butterfly did in the story. Nowadays, with only one child in most families, parents do whatever they can to satisfy the child’s needs and even do for him what should be done on his own. Consequently, the child is unable to look after himself without his parents’ presence. Too much care from parents rids children of their chances to grow strong by conquering obstacles. Just as a saying goes, “Flowers from a greenhouse can never withstand a storm”, If I were a parent, I would first keep him well informed that life is never easy and that he should be ready to face any challenges. Besides, I would expose him to the hardships in life instead of protecting him from difficulties, providing them with chances to fight for his own bright future by overcoming difficulties.

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（1）】

基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇中国载人宇宙飞船“神舟号”的简介。

【写作内容】

请根据以下信息，写一篇关于“中国载人宇宙飞船辉煌10年”的简讯。

【写作要求】

1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【参考范文】基础写作 (One possible version)

The last decade has witnessed the rapid development and splendid achievements in China’s manned spacecrafts to prepare for the exploration of the moon and Mars in the future. On October 15, 2003, Shenzhou V, China’s first manned spacecraft was launched into space with China’s first astronaut Yang Liwei, which made China the third country to send man to space independently. Since then, another three manned spacecrafts have sent 7 men and 1 woman astronauts into space, accomplishing their own tasks successfully with rapid development in science and technology. Most proudly, Shenzhou X took off carrying a crew of three astronauts: Nie Haisheng, Zhang Xiaoguang and Wang Yaping on 11 June, 2013. During this voyage, Wang Yaping, China’s second female astronaut, successfully conducted some scientific experiments and delivered China’s first space lecture to Chinese students by live television broadcasts.

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（1）】

读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Benefits of honesty

Sarah Darling met a homeless man called Billy Ray Harris and gave him her purse, with all her change in it. It was not until the next morning she realized that she had left her diamond ring in the purse. To her surprise, when she and her husband Bill Krejci found Billy, Billy immediately returned the ring. The grateful couple paid him back for his honesty by emptying out their pockets.

However, Bill Krejci, a web designer, felt that he needed to do something more for this honest man. He set up a special page for him on money- raising site "Give Forward" with a goal of raising $1,000 in 90 days. In just four days, the donations rose to over $85,000.

That was not all. Because of all the media coverage, Billy reunited with his elder brother, Edwin Harris who he had not met for 27 years. The two talked for 45 minutes on the phone and Edwin was planning to take Billy to his home in Lubbock, Texas. All this good fortune came just because Billy did the right thing - He returned something that did not belong to him. Honesty is surely the best policy!

【写作内容】

1．以约30个词概括短文的内容；

2．以约120个词就“因诚实而得到的收获”发表你的看法。内容包括：

(1)简述你对Billy Ray Harris事例的理解或看法：

(2)记述一次你（或你的朋友）“诚实待友”的经历：

(3)你对“诚实待友”的建议或方法。

【写作要求】

1．在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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【参考范文】读写任务 (One possible version)

The passage is a story about honesty. Billy Ray Harris was given many donations after he honestly returned a diamond ring to Sarah Darling. Moreover, he got the opportunity to reunite with his long-lost brother.

I appreciate Billy Ray Harris very much. His honesty touched Sarah Darling and her

大同市信息教育网2016考生登录处(五)
山西省大同市2016高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编(1)

山西大同市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选编（1）

书面表达训练

你有一位英国网友,名叫Tom, 他听说了中国故宫，但知道不多，于是给你发来e-mail。请你向他介绍一下有关中国故宫的一些情况。请根据下面提供的一些要点给他回一封电子邮件：

1. 故宫（the Palace Museum），又叫紫禁城（the Forbidden City）。它于1407 年开始修建，20万人花了13年多的时间，于1420年建成。

2. 它所有的宫殿一共有9999个房间。在中国，9这个数字传统地被认为是一个吉祥数。

3. 现在，故宫免费向中国中学生于每周星期二开放。

4. 故宫有着中国历史上五千多年的珍宝（precious treasure)。请他亲自来看一看。 注意：

1.词数120左右；

2.信的开头已经为你写好：

Dear Tom ,

It is nice to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to tell you something about the Palace Museum.

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【参考范文】

The Palace Museum is also called the Forbidden City. It took 200,000 workers more than 13 years to build the Forbidden City. The Forbidden City was finished being built in 1420. The largest museum in the world ,the Palace Museum, holds cultural treasures from the past 5,000 years of Chinese history . The city’s palaces have 9,999 rooms altogether. Chinese people traditionally have thought of nine as a lucky number . Students from all over China now visit in groups at no charge every Tuesday . I hope you can come to China and take a look at this museum with your own eyes. Best wishes.

Yours, Li Ming

书面表达训练

高三的你明年即将毕业。现在校报征稿，请根据以下要点写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对高三生活的体会和建议。

1. 对老师与家长的关爱表示感谢；

2. 向与自己发生过矛盾的同学表达歉意；

3. 努力学习，实现人生梦想；

4. 对学弟、学妹的建议。

注意：

1. 可适当加入细节，使行文连贯；

2. 词数：100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总字数）。

High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate.

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【参考范文】 High school is always considered as the most cherished period of one’s life. As a Senior 3 student, it won’t be long before I graduate. Now, I have much to share with my fellow students. Firstly, I would like to show my appreciation of help from those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included. Without their help and advice, my life would be different. Secondly, it's high time to say sorry to classmates whom I hurt or misunderstood. Communication and smiles act as bridges to friendship. Above all, I've made up my mind to make every effort to study, for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the old saying goes, "No pains, no gains."?

Finally I hope that all the younger fellows can make full use of time, because time and tide wait for no men

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（5）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

你班举行了一场关于“中学生身心健康问题”的主题班会，请你就此用英语写一篇报道：

【写作内容】

主题：关注中学生心理健康

时间与地点：周三下午在本班教室

参加人员：全班学生、班主任、心理辅导老师

讨论问题：

1、考试焦虑，任性行为；

2、脾气暴烈，不愿与人交流；

3、青春叛逆期，不听父母和老师的话。

应对建议：

1、积极参加各项集体活动；

2、每天坚持有规律的锻炼；

3、保持积极乐观的人生态度。

参考词汇：青春叛逆期adolescent treachery period

集体活动collective activities

【写作要求】

1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【参考范文】基础写作 (One possible version)

On Wednesday afternoon we, in our classroom, held a class meeting on the theme of focusing on mental health of middle school students, and all the classmates together with our head teacher and our psychology teacher attended the meeting. At the meeting, we discussed some mental problems, which mainly referred not only to exam anxiety, wayward behavior and violent temper all leading to students’ unwillingness to communicate with others, but also to turning a deaf ear to their parents or teachers in the adolescent treachery period. But how do we deal with these problems? First, we are supposed to take an active part in all kinds of collective activities, and

then stick to taking physical exercise regularly every day. Finally, we should learn to keep a positive and cheerful attitude towards our life.

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（5）】

读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

A Warm Welcome

A boy quarreled with his parents and ran away from home. He had a hard life without any contact with his family for years. Later he wanted to go home but he was afraid that his parents might not welcome him.

Finally he decided to send a letter to his father expressing his desire to return home and begging his pardon. In his letter he asked his father to tie a white ribbon on the tree near his house by the side of the railway lines if he was ready to welcome him back home. If he did not see the ribbon on the tree, he would think that his family did not welcome him and then he would leave them forever.

He boarded the train and became very nervous as the train was about to pass by his home. To his surprise, the tree was fully decorated with hundreds of white ribbons which danced in the wind. His family did not want him to miss the sight of the ribbon and the welcome signal, so they covered the whole tree with ribbons to show their whole-hearted happiness and willingness to welcome him back.

【写作内容】

1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容；

2．然后以约120个词谈谈你对“父爱如山”的看法，内容包括：

(1)你读后的感受或感想； (2)你或他人感受父爱的事例； (3)你对“父爱如山”的理解。

【写作要求】

1．在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不

得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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【参考范文】读写任务 (One possible version)

A boy quarreled with his parents and left home. After years of hard life, he wrote a letter to his father, asking if he would welcome him back. In fact, his parents had been whole-heartedly expecting his return!

I am deeply moved by the story. And it reminds me of my father.

At my junior school, my father never showed his love to me, so I thought he did not love me and sometimes I was upset about it. However, when I left home for senior school, he called me frequently and just asked me, “How’s your study and life? When will you come back?” Gradually, I realized that he missed me although he would never say it out.

Indeed, fathers’ love is like a mountain. It’s heavy because they devote all their love to us and it’s silent because they do not know how to express it. Faced with their love, we should accept it silently to show our appreciation.

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（6）】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分） 以下是你班“自然灾害”讨论会的记录汇总。

【写作内容】

根据下面方框中的信息，为英语校报写—篇报道。

时间：三月九日，班会课

与会人员：全班同学及班主任

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山西省大同市2016高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编(2)

山西大同市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选编（2）

书面表达训练

假设你叫李华，你所在的城市要为明年暑假招聘英语导游，你打算应聘。请根据下列提示，用英语写一篇面试稿。

1. 对英语有浓厚的兴趣，口语熟练，经常与英国网友(net-pal)聊天；

2. 性格开朗，思维敏捷，善于与人沟通；

3. 本地人，熟悉所在城市的历史与文化。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Hello!

My name is Li Hua. It’s a great honor to be here to have this interview for an English guide in the summer vacation.

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【参考范文】

Hello!

My name is Li Hua. It’s a great honor to be here to have this interview for an English guide in the summer vacation.

To begin with, as a senior high student, I am crazy about English and can speak it fluently. I’m used to practising speaking English in everyday life. For example, I often chat with some English net-pals in my spare time, which really contributes to my fluency in oral English. Besides, I’m open-minded, quick in thought and very fond of social practice,which I think is a quality that a good guide should have. Above all, as a native of the city, I know a lot about its history and culture. So I;m sure that the foreigners will appreciate my work and enjoy their stay in our city.

If I’am given the chance to be a guide, I’ll spare no effort to do it well. In a word, I’m looking forward to it.

Thank you.

书面表达训练

请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。

As children approach adulthood, school education has a great effect on the development of them and how they deal with the relationship between teachers and students is quite important.

要求：（1）就此材料发表你的看法；

（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点；

（3）词数不少于120。

【参考范文】

What is presented in the material is that a good relationship between teachers and students will benefit the development of the students.

I’m quite in favor of the above idea. For a start, good teachers are regarded as the students’ friends and they’ll deal with the students’ problems fairly and equally. A good teacher should have a clear idea of what the students are thinking of and caring for. Besides, students rely on teachers and they should respect each other. Mutual understanding and experienced guidance from the teachers are also important.

In short, the harmonious and good relationship between teachers and students will make the students feel relaxed and easy in their study and growth, thus contributing to their development.

Thank you .

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（4）】

基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇中国扇子文化的简介。

【写作内容】

请根据以下信息，写一篇关于中国扇子文化的介绍。

1．扇子历史：(1)大约出现在三千年前的殷朝；

(2)在中国流行的具体时间难以确定； (3)历来中国被誉为“制扇王国”。

2．扇子原料：羽毛、丝绸、纸、骨头、棕榈叶。

3．扇子产地：(l)中国浙江杭州市以做扇子而闻名；

(2) 1857年成立的王兴记扇子店是其中一个老品牌。

4．扇子特点：(1)集中国书法、绘画与诗歌为一体；

(2)种类繁多，是生活用具，更是艺术品。

*棕榈叶palm leaf

**书法calligraphy

【写作要求】

1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

【参考范文】基础写作(One possible version )

China has been honored as the “Fan-making Kingdom” in the world. The earliest Chinese fans appeared during the Yin Dynasty about 3,000 years ago, but it is hard to say the exact time when fans became popular in Chinese history. The fans are usually made of such materials as feathers, silk, paper, bone and palm leaves. In China, Hangzhou City, Zhejiang Province is well-known for its fan-making and there has been an old famous brand — Wangxingji Fan Shop which was first established in 1857. Speaking of their characteristics, the various fans are art works more than daily tools since they are combined with Chinese calligraphy, paintings and poems as a whole.

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（4）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

We all know that blood donation is a beneficial social act: we help other people who

need blood in a way that is not really troublesome. Besides, blood donation means that you are participating in public screening program, which helps local health officials to review the general health trends and supports easier monitoring activities concerning disease trends or epidemics in your area. However, do you know that there are other more personal benefits related to donating your blood? They prove that donating blood is not only beneficial to other people, but also to yourself. The most obvious benefit of donating blood is the free health screening process. Before donating your blood, you will be tested for possible health problems or infectious diseases, and officers will tell you if you are qualified for blood donation. By this screening test, you will get the information if there is something wrong with your health.

Other health benefits related to blood donation are the reduction of cardiovascular(心血管的) disease. A high level of iron in the blood has been related to cardiovascular disease, which explains why men and post-menopausal(绝经后的) women have higher risks in cardiovascular disease.

【写作内容】

1．以约30个词概括短文要点；

2．以约120个词谈谈“自愿无偿献血”，内容包括：

(1)陈述自愿无偿献血的人的观点； (2)列举不愿无偿献血的人的忧虑； (3)你的看法及打算。

【写作要求】

1．在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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【参考范文】读写任务(One possible version)

The passage tells us that donating blood is beneficial not only to the public, but also to the donor himself, who can both get free physical examination and reduce the risk of heart disease.

As the voluntary unpaid blood donation is concerned, some people think it is very helpful and beneficial. On the one hand, giving is a good act and donating blood can save the lives of people who are in need of blood. On the other hand, by giving the blood away, the body will always have fresh cells, which lead to a better body system. However, many people are still unwilling to donate blood with some worries. For one thing, they think blood donation will make them feel weak and unable to participate in activities easily. For another, they are also afraid of getting infected with something during the donation.

In my opinion, donating is a good thing and being a blood donor is a very rewarding experience. Therefore, I am willing to donate my blood.

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（6）】读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Last month, the Ministry of Education asked all schools to get their students to take part in an online "Blessing the Motherland" program during the Spring Festival. But, surprisingly, some netizens (网民) have questioned, even criticized the proposal. Economic globalization has brought about cultural diversity in China. As a result, many young people prefer to celebrate Christmas, Valentine's Day and other Western festivals rather than celebrate traditional Chinese festivals such as the Dragon Boat Festival. It is important to teach the importance of Chinese culture to such people if we don't want the traditional festivals to become history.

By chance, the lunar New Year starts on Feb 14, which was celebrated as Valentine's Day only in the West a few years ago, but now is a sort of craze among youths in China's cities. That's why the "Blessing the Motherland" is important; it is aimed at making

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山西省大同市2016高考英语二轮复习 书面表达选编(4)

山西大同市2016高考英语书面表达【二轮】选编（4）

【高考英语模拟试题】写作（满分30分）

Michael是一名美国中学生，在学校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画，不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事和寓意写成一篇短文，向他解释。

注意：

1、词数：80—120

2、参考词汇：撞上bump into;锄头 hoe

【参考范文】写作（满分30分）

One possible version:

Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields every day.One day, while he was ploughing the fields, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit lying by the trunk. He picked it up and found that it was a fat rabbit. He thought to himself,"Since it is so easy to get a rabbit like that, why should I work so hard all daylong?'! He threw his hoe away and lay by the tree every day, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his foolishness and returned to his fields, he found that all his crops were dead. The story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by trusting chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewards without hard work. 一、评分原则

1．本题总分为30分，按5个档次给分。

2．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确

定或调整档次，最后给分。

3．词数少于120和多于150的，从总分中减去2分。【大同市信息教育网2016考生登录处】

4．评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文

的连贯性。

5．拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。

英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。

6．如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 二、内容要点

观点正确，态度积极向上，文体不限。 三、各档次的给分范围和要求 第一档：（21—25分）

很好地完成了试题规定的任务。

——对题中所提供的信息进行了恰当的描述，清楚地表达了自己的观点并进行了充分合理的论证。

——语法结构和词汇选用恰当、丰富。

——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。

——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。

第二档：（16—20分）

较好地完成了试题规定的任务。

——对题中所提供的信息进行了描述，表达了自己的观点并进行了论证。 ——应用的语法结构和词汇能基本满足任务的要求。

——语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 ——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 第三档：（11—15分） 基本完成了试题规定的任务。

——能描述题目中的信息，表达了自己的观点并尝试进行论证。 ——应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 ——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 ——应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 第四档；（6—10分） 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。

——能涉及到题目所提供的信息，体现了对问题的看法及其原因。 ——语法结构单调，词汇知识有限。

——有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。

——较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。信息未能清楚地传达给读者。 第五档：（1—5分） 未完成试题规定的任务

——很少涉及题目中所提供的信息，个人观点表达不清，而且没有阐述原因。 ——语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。

——较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 ——缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 0分

信息未能传达给读者。

未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法辨认。

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（2）】 基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

以下是一场关于学生十八岁成人礼报道的主要内容。 【写作内容】

请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯。

成人礼growing-up ceremony; 五四青年节Chinese Youth Day 【写作要求】

1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容； 2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】

句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。 【参考范文】基础写作(One possible version)

On Chinese Youth Day, May 4th, 2013, a growing-up ceremony was held in our school gym to help us recognize our duty for ourselves, our families and the society. Taking part in the ceremony, we senior three students realize that we are grown-ups rather than children. Therefore, it is important to show our appreciation for our parents who have gone through hardships to bring us up. Furthermore, as a member of society, we must fulfill our duty to our country. In a word, as adults, we have more responsibilities on our shoulders and should take more into consideration when making decisions.

【深圳市2014高考英语综合能力测试题（2）】 读写任务（共l小题，满分25分）

阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

These are the two simple words, "if' and "what". These two words can be used in many sentences and questions by them, selves, but if you put them together, it forms a serious question, "What if...?"

This question will bring you back to a certain time in your life when you made a choice. You may not be happy with that choice today and often think about why you did it, but you made the decision because it was the best choice at that specific moment m your life. Now, years later, you start to think about that specific choice you made. You mentally struggle with yourself and consider if you could choose again, what would you do? Would it be totally different?

I truly believe if you want something very much, you can do it and achieve it, because "Where there is a will, there is-a way". You can correct the mistakes of your decisions for the past, go out and find happiness in the right decisions for your future. It is never too late to do anything in life. 【写作内容】

1．以约30词概括上文的主要内容。

2．以约120个词就“人生努力永不晚”谈一谈你的看法，内容包括： (1)你对人生努力的理解； (2)举一个“大器晚成”的例子； (3)你对实例的评价或看法。 【写作要求】

1．在作文中可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

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