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导读: 微笑英文作文(共6篇)微笑英语作文Learn To SmileSmile, how warm the word is! It can make anyone happy And this happiness is from the deep of heart Mother’s smile is like a sprin...

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微笑英文作文(一)
微笑英语作文

Learn To Smile

Smile, how warm the word is! It can make anyone happy. And this happiness is from the deep of heart.

Mother’s smile is like a spring wind, so gentle when you are sad, it can make you happy again; when you fail, it can make you stand up and work hard again; when you give up, it can make you try your best again. Smile, so easy, but also so useful. So, let’s learn to smile. Everyone needs others’ smile. When we give others a smile, we will feel happy, too. And maybe next time, when you need a smile, the person who received your smile will give it to you.

Let’s learn to smile more often, I believe it can even make the whole world warm. Living with a smile, every day will be sunshine.

微笑英文作文(二)
learn to smile学会微笑英语作文

What is smile.Smile is a kind of language, let a person feel warm. Smile is a song, sing the love in the heart. Smile is the power, let people be full of confidence.

When you fail in the exam,don’t be sad.You should smile to yourself and you will have confident. When we are criticized by our teachers or our parents, We should know that they want to make us better.So In daily life,we should learn to smile. When we give others a smile,we will feel happy, too. Living with a smile, every day will be sunshine.Fust learn to smile,you will find the world is wonderful.

微笑英文作文(三)
英文作文-微笑-SMILE

Smile

Why you looks so happy?

【微笑英文作文】

Because on your face there is a smile!

What a smile is?

and what it used to be? I think smile is a feeling from your bottom of your heart,

it can show your feelings:happy or angry!

With a smile on your face,

you can make friends easily.

Because it shows that you are a very friendly person, people would like to talk to a person who with a smile but not a angrily face. More over,a smlie can keep a good health and let you in a good mood! Take the factors into consideration,

you could understand why people around us are all with a smile!

微笑英文作文(四)
初中英语作文:学会微笑

初中英语作文:学会微笑

Smile, how warm the word is! it can make anyone happy. and this happiness is from the bottom of heart.

It's not like enthusiastic laughter, but just warm, makes your heart warm.

Mother's smile is like a spring wind, so gentle when you are sad, it can make you happy again; when you fail, it can make you stand up and work hard again; when you give up, it can make you try your best again… Smile, so easy, but also so useful.

So, let's learn to smile. everyone needs others' smile. when we give others a smile, we will feel happy, too. and maybe next time, when you need a smile, the person who received your smile will give it to you. Let's learn to smile often, i believe it can even make the whole warm. living with a smile, every day will be sunshine.

微笑英文作文(五)
湖北省高考英语作文(2010-关于微笑:半开放式作文)

【微笑英文作文】 【微笑英文作文】

2010高考英语作文湖北卷

请你根据以下提示,结合生活中的一个事例,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈微笑的作用。 The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. A smile can help us get through difficult situation and find friends in a world of strangers. A smile can open doors and tear down walls.

注意:① 无须写标题;

② 内容只需涉及一个方面;

③ 词数为100左右。

The Importance of the Smile

The best example of universally understood body language may be the smile. It is not only a simple facial expression to show that you are happy, but it is also a behavior to extend your goodwill to others(定义式中心句).

I didn’t realize the importance of a hearty smile until I was on an outing in my parents’ car at the age of ten(时间顺序一). We were driving at a high speed when the car right in front of us suddenly stopped(时间顺序二). Luckily, father braked sharply and narrowly missed bumping into it(时间顺序三). Bursting into a fury, father was going to jump out of the car and have words with the driver(时间顺序四). To my surprise, the driver got out of his car with an apologetic smile and said sorry repeatedly, which soon soothed my father’s anger(时间顺序五).

It is true that a smile can tear down the wall between strangers(总结句). Remember, smile, and the world smiles with you(期待句).

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分析:

1. 本文结构应该是背景式开篇。第二段用时间顺序法或步骤法列出一个例子。第三段总结并期待。实际写作过程中作者使用了一种新的开篇法:定义法。定义法的关键是能够用英语准确地解释一个英语单词。这里作者的解释是“微笑不但是一种表示自己很快乐的面部表情,更是一种向别人传达你的善意的行为”,使用了“not only…but also句型”。

2. 感觉这篇作文难就难在要用一个事例来说明微笑的重要性。就作者本人而言,讲述生活中的例子时,极不愿意选取或者编造自己生活中的例子。但是,由于平时阅读方面积累有限,三十分钟之内极难想出适当的某名人关于微笑的故事。即使想出来,用简单的语言完整地叙述这个故事并不容易。只能硬着头皮编一个情节上较为合理的小故事。

3. 设计出故事情节之后。作者下一步要做的就是运用多样化的句型,讲故事情节串联起来。用四个左右的句子,按照时间顺序法或步骤法排列出来。时间顺序法的段落不一定要写中心句。在这个段落中,作者分别运用了“not…until”、“when引导的时间状语从句”、“and引导的并列句”、“现在分词表伴随”以及“which引导的非限制性定语从句”,讲例子控制在五句。努力做到“让句子多样化,让内容简明扼要”。

4. 写完了第二段,第三段就好收尾了。其中的期待句,作者再次运用了仿拟的修辞手法,借用美国女诗人的名句“Laugh, and the world laughs with you”作仿拟。

新闻链接1:

美国高中生做2012年湖北省高考英语试卷

(楚天都市报记者望隽实习生姚班,通讯员肖继成、徐跃千)

荆楚网消息,美国中学生来做中国高考(论坛)的英语(论坛)试卷,感觉会如何?昨日,国侨办与我省外侨办主办的“海外华裔青少年‘中国寻根之旅’夏令营”湖北分营在汉开营,记者邀请其中三位美国中学生,就今年我省高考英语试题进行“考试”。三位考生均感叹作文题难以下手。

三位考生中,18岁的仝逸峰刚被美国杜克大学录取,是位准大学生;15岁的葛昊,即将读高二;12岁的林海即将升入初二。英语高考试卷总分为150分。因“考试”利用活动间隙进行,不具备播放听力试题的条件,这部分测试予以省略,剩下试题总分为120分。

三位“考生”答题很快,但做到书面表达部分的“短文写作”时,葛昊不禁挠起了后脑勺:“我不太明白这道题是什么意思”,仝逸峰和林海也皱起了眉头。该题要求考生根据提示谈谈微笑的作用,记者略作解释后,三人继续答题。

对照标准答案,东湖中学英语教研组组长徐昕应记者邀请批改了试题。作文满分为25分,仝逸峰得18分,葛昊、林海得19分。综合各题得分情况再换算成满分100分,仝逸峰得85.8分,葛昊和林海同为81.2分,三人平均得分为89分。

徐昕评点说,三位考生在词汇知识运用、阅读理解两部分失分很少,反映出考生的阅读、词汇能力都很强。扣分最多的,集中在“书面表达”部分。如果将作文分为五档的话,那么三人的作文成绩均属于第四档(最高是第五档),并不能得最高分。“他们的作文表达都较地道,但句式缺乏变化,比较平淡。”

葛昊认为,这份高考试卷不算难,相当于美国高一(注:美国高中四年)的水平,但他对作文题很不适应,感觉比较空,无从下手。仝逸峰说,美国作文试题多为提供一个概念或名人观点,要求考生结合生活经历或读过的书谈看法,这样考生更觉得有话可说。

徐昕说,这3位中学生生长在美国,以英语为母语,“如果他们解答高考英语试卷都感到不适应,这是否给我们的英语教学和高考评价体系带来一些思考?”

【微笑英文作文】

新闻链接2:

湖北省大冶一中王幼平、冯建国老师点评

这种命题改变了传统的提纲式、表格式、图画式、图表式等命题模式,向我们展示了一篇半开放式的作文模式,湖北省是首次采用。下面我们来探讨一下这篇短文的写作。【微笑英文作文

一、审题

1. 审格式

这应该属于一篇议论文。议论文的三要素是:论点、论据和论证,因此文章从结构上来说应该写三段。提示所给部分即论点,谈到微笑的作用:微笑可以帮助我们渡过难关;在陌生的世界找到朋友;敲开大门;拆除高墙(化解矛盾,消除隔阂)。这里谈到了微笑四个方面的作用,结合题目注意事项中的第二点,我们只需要谈其中的一个方面,无需面面俱到。由于论点已经给出,我们只需提供生活当中的一个实例,来说明微笑其中一个方面的作用。作为文章结尾,我们需要结合实例论证微笑在这个方面的作用。即学生的文章由两大部分组成:

Part 1: Tell about a case in life.

Part 2: Prove the function of smile based on the case.

2. 审人称

很明显,文章应该使用第一人称来讲述生活中自己亲身经历的一个事例。

3. 审时态

讲述的事例是发生在过去的事情,因此应该用一般过去时。论证部分是客观真理,应该使用一般现在时。

二、确定内容要点,写简单句。

讲述的故事一定要简明扼要,不要重复啰嗦。论证部分要结合实例,无需泛泛而谈。构思好故事后,将内容要点用简单句在草稿纸上写出来。

三、润色句子

适当用上高级词汇和句型以及过渡词将简单句连接起来。

四、修改

快速默读全文,确保行文简洁明了、流畅自然并检查语法、句法、单词拼写、标点等是否正确。

五、誊写

将草稿纸上修改好的文章工整干净地誊写在作文纸上。

微笑英文作文(六)
2014年高考英语作文预测:I want to smile

  某报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”,现向全球征募会员,要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to smile "的英语短文。 请你以申请者的身份,根据以下思路写一篇。

  Advantages of smile

  Smile at parents and friends ----

  范文:

  I want to smile

  There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life , life will smile on us in return .So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible.

  First, I would like to smile at parents because they have given me life and taken all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me 。 With their help , I have made great progress. I would like to say "thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.

  In a word , let’s greet every day with a smile . Tomorrow is another day .

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